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HaUzTiLe:
This is a verse to make ya'll think.//
Life gets me down so much I feel like Im gonna sink.//
Living in the city of angels but all I see are demons.//
Speaking of demons, I nut up in a bitch wit no rubber and leave my semen.//
No voice for the poor, so they suffer.//
The rich had a voice till I killed Michael Buffer.//
And this world needs to open their eyes.//
Our president hides behind a disguise.//
But I see his nEW World oRDER.//
Im an AMERICAN, but no chance of me being in his corner.//
Hopefully he crashes and burns.//
Then I'll grab his ashes and stick em in an urn.//
I wanna be a voice for the people, but they all attack me.//
If u hate me so much, step to me as a man, and try to crack me.//
I'll come around and strike you like lighting.//
Im the soldier who will go down fighting.//

Dreamz:
yo man it was dope keep it up

sleepn2zero9:

--- Quote from: HaUzTiLe on June 02, 2004, 03:44:40 PM ---Speaking of demons, I nut up in a bitch wit no rubber and leave my semen.//

--- End quote ---
I liked everything but this line...itz hella off topic....and it does'nt make much sense either...what do demons have to do with nuttin in a bitch?...

but other than that....it was a cool lil verse....

HaUzTiLe:
Propz to the both of you fo droppin yo comments, as for the "bitches and demons" lol... Wit my past experiences bitches are demons, in a freestyle your mind goes out in all directions. I think demons, I picture a bitch.

kickz_deluxe:
i think it was deep overall, good thoughtz, good passagez, but this line with the bitch didnt fit at all n is kinda upsettin yo piece. but i liked readin it.............hm.......
oh yeah, my two favorite passagez are:

-And this world needs to open their eyes.//
Our president hides behind a disguise

-I'll come around and strike you like lighting.//
Im the soldier who will go down fighting

yeah, theyre dope, i think
keep up writin

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