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Now_Im_Not_Banned:
I feel pressure on my shoulder & tension in my muscles
A moor of thoughts, festooned with all my struggles
My troubles, a puddle of mud, life under rubble
Everything's extemporaneous, I lose my breath when I hustle
As tears drip, I'm fearless, appearance...
is the covering to my soul, I'd rather be jumping off a sheer cliff
Insufferable noise is the soundtrack to my existence
But I mask that with music, because the outside world's resistance
So imperceptible it's incredible, it pulls me back to reality
I'm not aware if it's just me, inclination is abnormality
Bells ring loudly awaken my mental hell
I see devils with halos, hearing their gentle yells
Soul can't escape, even though it's suffering
But maybe I'm just a coward who needs some toughening

bez:
Loved that mate.  Thought that was dope.

Kill:
afraid of grundy?


no on the real, that was actually quite dope, didn't know u can write shit like this, props

Now_Im_Not_Banned:

--- Quote from: A Gwen Stefani groupie named Kill on October 10, 2004, 06:54:51 AM ---afraid of grundy?


no on the real, that was actually quite dope, didn't know u can write shit like this, props

--- End quote ---


Yea, I write all sorts of shit...Most of the shit I drop on here is straight out keystyle on the spot...Straight off the dome shit...The dope shit I use for songs...Thanks though...PeACe

Kill:

--- Quote from: Now_I_Know on October 11, 2004, 05:25:14 PM ---
--- Quote from: A Gwen Stefani groupie named Kill on October 10, 2004, 06:54:51 AM ---afraid of grundy?


no on the real, that was actually quite dope, didn't know u can write shit like this, props

--- End quote ---


Yea, I write all sorts of shit...Most of the shit I drop on here is straight out keystyle on the spot...Straight off the dome shit...The dope shit I use for songs...Thanks though...PeACe

--- End quote ---

so u got shit recorded? Since u make beats too, are u actually planning to work as an artist for real? Cause this is actually better (and especially mostly less formulatic) than what the great majority of people come up with when they wanna be 'deep' (how i hate that word) that's why i gotta give you props...ur battle shit is good too, but it's something more people are capable of comin up with

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