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rafsta:
this is some audio i dropped, its only 430kb a 55 second track.... drop some feed back !!!!

http://s15.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0IPXOX9JYGV5D2GX0D8HSJ1EUN

rafsta:
and these are the lyrics !!

the fire burnin in my eyes,
thousands candles lit,
thousands years of mental excersize,
can you blame me ?
angry, nah its no surprise,
fools plannin my demise,
i got my own desires,
wont sell my soul to any buyers,
wont mingle fuck petty liars,
words and actions i terrorise,
critisize,
get away with anything ? fuck no, break all ties,
thats for all the lies,
now all you got to offer is your worthless cries ?
please, thinner than mc donalds fries,
call me jonah lomu score more tries,
embodie all the lines, consistent with no lies,
they will never learn, stuck in their reprise,
what you win ? bein a wak kunt NO PRIZE,
cant help products of their own device,
wont accept facts, act stable but inside wak,
cant manage a track, often get slapped,
from the bass of raf, now can you fuck with that ?

rafsta:
ey some feedback !!!

Thirteen:
not too bad, your flow goes a little off in the middle but you go back on track...only other thing is with the lies in your rhyme scheme, it's really noticable that you use the word a few times (mixed with liar)

not too bad though

rafsta:
cool, thanks for the feedback..

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