Author Topic: where is superman (Read 153 times)

hope glimmers · « **on:** January 05, 2005, 09:38:53 AM »

Pray for those lost in the water
Baby sons, little daughters
Thousands were killed
We all take the bill
Grateful to be of aid
But will the pain fade
Not for the mothers
The fathers the brothers
Where is superman
Together we ban
To help to lost
As we pray at the cross
Medicine, its needed
Disease bein breeded
Bombarded astounded
The children, pounded
We weren’t blindfolded
To the mothers on the beach
With their kids outta reach
From safety
Thinking maybe
They can save them
In the sea, condemned
For those lost in the sea
God, please help thee

not done yet.. but any suggestions?

smila · « **Reply #1 on:** January 15, 2005, 03:15:11 AM »

I altered it a little bit tel me what ya think...i also used 1 line outof lost angels...hope he dont mind!!!

Pray for those lost in the water baby sons, little daughters
Thousands were killed that day and we all take the bill
Deverstatin waves causing the pain of family graves
Grateful to be of aid but will the pain fade?
Darkness over shadowin there day, hugh waves lettin nothin stand in there way
People familys lost everything only to be left wiv a sense of pain
Now depression will settle in at a young age, hope they dnt blame God for the rage
For the mothers the fathers the brothers
Where is superman when ya need him??
Together we should all contribute...
To help the lost, all should pray towards the cross
Cloths, food and medicine is needed while diseases bein breeded
Bombarded astounded the children, pounded
No~one was blindfolded to them mothers on the beach
With their kids outta reach from safety
Terrified...thinking maybe they can save them
Lost in the sea, sickening watchin people that cant breath
To all you and God i ask..... please help thee!!!

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