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Rookie Battle! lets do this
M Dogg™:
Interesting battle
I gotta say KillaTay10, his rhyme flowed better I think, and it was pretty witty. Both where simple, but when done right, simple is good. Just keep working and try you best.
wilz:
cheers for the feedback.
xxLx7:
hey wiltz, I don't really care if the rap was done ages ago, I wanted to add my input, I didn't want to say which one was better, so I wrote my own. So keep your fuckin idots to yourself, and spend some time working on your rhymes :) you silly bastard. You both have some pretty good lyrics though....
Kyle
wilz:
u added a letter to my name so it would rhyme lol
xxLx7:
opps, my bad, I didn't even notice that. Sorry about that one..
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