Tournarment Round 2: Notorious Mack vs. wilz

[M Dogg™]

This battle is now the second round of the tournarment. The winner goes to the Final 4. Good luck.

rules:
due by Friday April 8 at 11:59pm California time
8-12 bars

good luck.

[da_notorious_mack]

Wilz you a fraud an liar,wit no reported priors...
the type of whore with wires..
who collect evidence to take us court an try us...
fuckin punks i hope they all expire...
so i stay "around chrome" like a "ballers tyre!"
son ya flows forced an tired..in need of a face lift...
i was the best here,im jus retrievin my placement...
an leaving this statement...the entertainment of
watch his brain bleeding on pavement...


lol...

i lace my dough like haitian joe lace his dro..
leave you wit less than "50 cent" wit no "places to go!"...
put this fake inna hold,chop em up chop em down..l
gats poppin rounds,its all plaque's an coffins now..
ya moms in a black frock or gown...
ill console here..2 weeks later her bodies found....its that cold mufucka lol

[wilz]

I'm sorry but i just go back from a short break due to family reasons would i be able to post tomorrow as i must sleep now.

[wilz]

Whats wrong bitch can't u finish your spit? You name droppin lookin  for a hit, we can all see you ain't brought shit.

Notorious Mack, bitch please I got more flavour comin out my ball sack, Just ask ya girl she tell ya how I mack//
You even got a girl? I heard you take it up the ass crack now that shit is whack, so one more word i'ma force ya the fuck back//

I'ma do it Tony Soprano style and fuck u up wit a putter, your flow so weak, shit its just mutter and stutter, u belong in the gutter//
I drink str8 whisky you sip alize, my voice goes all raspy, you sip and sound fuckin gay//
I'm a str8 up killa im in a different class, i'll bet you  my bottle of milla will feel loose up in ya ass//
You know what my rhymes are bout, its hittin so fuckin hard all you little closet gay's bout to come out//
Im a street writer, you a rhyme biter, my rhymes can't be tighter so you know i can't go lighter, could be an all nighter//
You think you a gangsta you ain't nuthin but a fool, you ain't nuthin but a wanksta, ima take u back to school....//
Notorious Mack you ain't gettin the knack I showed you were your skills lack, I'ma bout to show you and make you see you're not so much a has been as a never will be

You statin "the best here". maybe before, not know cos young nigga wilz is indefenently here!

[M Dogg™]

Since Mack is in my crew, I was trying very hard to look for how he lost. You see, I try to vote for people not in my crew to be fair. In this case, being far is giving Mack the win. Though it was not the best shit I've read from him, I think that it was better than wilz, and that wilz, you are decent, but you are missing something, I don't know what, but that verse was misisng something.

[wilz]

kool, thanks for the feedback again. its all about experience. is Ryu the only judge or will there be more?

[authentic]

mack.. had it, just rolled off the tongue a little smoother