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K0NfUzIoN:
thuggin and poppin glocks is wut i love to rhyme bout
out thats not me so my mind screams "time out"
an amateur in this game so i keep it simple
my flows aint deep enuff to test yo mental
its detrimental, wen ur ghetto attitudes just a rental
wen u get found out the true G's aint too gentle
if u dont keep it real, theyll put u in check
and if u disrespec theyll put a new smile under ur neck
i bet that ninety eight point nine that post here aint real
they just say what they think applies to mass appeal
i dont kill, steal, or even keep it trill,
but i plan to convey wuts on my mind and wut i feel
im sick of the wannabes and its buggin me
i kno you a prep, why r u muggin me

DiSSENT:
[size=08pt]Sick, homie! I felt the concept, the wording, the flow & the vocab..that's some real shit right there. Figures that no1's given feedback yet, this was dope & probably too deep for the shallow or close-minded :P This verse shows a lot of depth, skill & honesty..Keep doin' you & stay up, dawg: 8.9/10 - Peace*[/size]

K0NfUzIoN:
thanks 4 the feedback keep it up rogue

K0NfUzIoN:
come on... if u dont like it tell me ppl

authentic:
haha sick....flowed nicely, keep it going konfuzion

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