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thizzmaster:
sac town is da place i rep
age 15 and i spit da best
ppl here my rhymes and dey become amazed
da kid so young  but he continues 2 blaze 8)
u can spit ur hardest i wont be fazed
cuz in da end im da1 wit da pasin grade
not much 2 say wen u touch da mike
ill leave u stumblin and fallin like iron mike
im not mac dre but u can mr furly
cuz afta da battle ill be gettin bossed by ur gurlie
ima end dis rap off nice and sweet
jut rember da name j roc dats me

DiSSENT:
Somewhat simplistic rhymin', but we all gotta start somewhere. Keep on writing & improving/elevating your skills, homie. At 15, I wasn't spittin' much different..just don't quit. You got potential..stay up - Peace*

K0NfUzIoN:
ya keep it up and try to get deeper.. only real complaint is u stole the furly/girlie from fellin myself... yadidimean?

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