Warrior Poet

[Legacy]

I hold this title with the state of a lions "Pride"/
Came through the board had cats tip-toaing if I was an up-tide/
But still wackness spreading thorughout the field/
Warrior mind set with pen and shield/
Force to make theses veterns kiss the ring, awe and kneel/
I can't help to notice off from a distant land looking shook like a fiend/
Sent the troops after em running back to his queen/
Trying send quick drops, not noticng his team gettin blowed out like afro-sheen/
My weakness would take a lifetime to find while my strength is instant/
Pure poetry is my only line of defense while you act silly and persistant/

[DiSSENT]

[size=09pt]Not that bad, but I think I've read better from you. Not bad for a quick drop though, I felt it, just not as much as the last rhyme of yours I read. Not hatin', just bein' honest. I liked the content, title & flow though. Keep doin' your thing, dawg..stay up - Peace*[/size]

[Legacy]

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[Legacy]

Up from the ashes ready to demoralize these konfused bastardz/
Off in the distant seeing bodies drop 1 by 1 in bright flashes/
But there's only one warrior, one poet, one master/
On the battle field of fallen solders and unadvoidable dissasters/
Son why you always crying bout your chick that left ya/
Dont be mad I got some play boy, reconize Legacy '05 Hugh Heffner/
It was a strategic move to destroy and tear down your Stature/
Because not only your pride I hold captive, but any respect that you crave after/
Years from now my name will reign greatness through out halls and rafters/
You be in a museum with your own exhibit entitled "Bitch made Rappers"/