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fucked up love
*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
i cant pluck up my courage to look into your eyez
i cant interrogate my knowledge to give maself advice
my entire world i built so strong is burnin up in fire
Id hate ya but like an annoyin song s sayin its only desire
i used to think id leave you, throw you away n cross you out
but i can forgive you, say its okay n laugh so loud
its like nuthins on my mind, at the same time ive to say a lot
this time im able to trust n forgive, but next time to kill-I swear to God!
Mr. O:
this is cool poem type..i liked the second line..
kinda offended when you swear to god...i don't swear..but since it's ya thing..it's kew..
keep it up
*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
thanx,man, can understand whatcha mean with da swear to god, but its just the expression of my feelings i had in this situation, ya know...maybe i wouldnt really swaer in real life...thanx for yo feedback
'Illicit':
yeh the second line was ill, keep it up
*Z* - The Queen of Dubcc:
thanx man, i appreciate it!
"give me a pen, a pad n a mic n im free.." ;)
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