here's a little rap

[Spicemuthafuc*in1]

this is a little something i wrote when i was high rapping to "im supposed to die tonght" instrumental.

The honest truth and reality of my subject matter
Is as real and fatal as narrowed arrows piercing through your bladder
Rhymes as hard as concrete over instrumentals that bang
Need tang like wu and like jermaine o’neal I go hard in the paint

It’s a fact that one better react when coming too close to contact
With the lyrical genius who disposes of petty emcees with one simple rap
Although many rappers before me have influenced my style and craft
If I bit from someone im citing his name two seconds after that on the same track

Many rappers today lack the very something that makes an artist stand out
Making music for someone else and not yourself is the definition of a sell out
Which is why I keep my style and vocals one of a kind
Because other artists are always trying to bite from another ones paragraphs and lines

As soon as you come up someone else is trying to take your place
Whether you deserve it or not doesn’t matter but face it there are too many rappers with not enough space
So you probably gonna end up finding some dope to lace, give some of this other candy a taste
Because my shit aint backed up, the units arent pushin and all this studio time is a waste

You can bet ill never find myself in this situation cause my musical creation
Is designed to infiltrate those surrounding me leading to their displacement
If I give a little warning others might have a small chance to react
So I hit em when they aint lookin like I was simeon rice going after the sack

I push weed with the essays sell crack to the crack fiends
Sell e too the e-heads and sell everything else to everyone in between
Fo sheez to yo knees with me it’s the policy
That model bitches suck dick till their tiny little throats feels weak

Its said that you should keep your friends close and your enemies closer
People will do anything to anyone for reconition, money, crack and doja
that’s why im always prepared like I told ya from front to back
Cause it’s a fact that you have to react when enemies try to increase their paper stack

All it takes is one look in my eyes and without any disguise
Out of my voice comes lyrics so fly leave you surprised
Don’t entice me and don’t instigate problems  with the don
Cause I’ll smash on anyone after I reach under the seat to grab my loaded gun

[Mr. O]

this is a little something i wrote when i was high rapping to "im supposed to die tonght" instrumental.

The honest truth and reality of my subject matter
Is as real and fatal as narrowed arrows piercing through your bladder
Rhymes as hard as concrete over instrumentals that bang
Need tang like wu and like jermaine o’neal I go hard in the paint

It’s a fact that one better react when coming too close to contact
With the lyrical genius who disposes of petty emcees with one simple rap
Although many rappers before me have influenced my style and craft
If I bit from someone im citing his name two seconds after that on the same track

Many rappers today lack the very something that makes an artist stand out
Making music for someone else and not yourself is the definition of a sell out
Which is why I keep my style and vocals one of a kind
Because other artists are always trying to bite from another ones paragraphs and lines

i have to resent some of the things that you like the sell out part..
i don't think just becaues you make music for someone else makes you a sell...dunno..it's the way i feel

other than that.it's good...keep it up

[Spicemuthafuc*in1]

thanks for your opinions i appreciate it.