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My first rhyme

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h cottie is bac-tive?:
my first ever rhyme never wrote down a line
spent all my time workin at a 9 to 5
place was a burger joint but i got caught smokin tree 8)
boss even had the balls to give me a loitering fee
said if i dont move my ass hes gonna call the police
so i put a red brick thru his new GT
immediately looked at me
but all he could say was nigga you crazy??
whipped out the 6 inch took a nice pee pee
i replied i just got promoted to a vigilante ;) 8


dont be too harsh! :-*

Prolific:
Dog I ain't gonna be harsh..But if this was on a track it would be on "Step Yo Game Up" for sure...Cats like me dig punchlines, multi's, wordplay and stronger rhyme..Just lookin out..Peace

authentic:
ay thats tight but put it in keystyle...cause thats the place where you could get recognition for your writtens. This is for audios

h cottie is bac-tive?:
lol "step yo game up" i like that

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