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Prolific:
Here is a little somethin I pulled off the other week...In this track you're hearing one talkbox line looped..I'm keeping the full part to myself for reasons. Let me know what you think...

Roger Boxing
Beat 30
  lo-fi URL:   http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=2887007&q=lo
  hi-fi URL:   http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=2887007&q=hi

The Soundclick
http://www.soundclick.com/prolificbvf

Suga Foot:
no doubt you have some production skills, but your beats are a mess.  It sounds like you just bought sample disks and threw stuff together. Anyway keep at it.

Prolific:
I'll take feedback anyway I can get it....A mess? How so...Out of the past 14 tracks the only sample that was used was on Beat 28 and I think 23...U come alright with your production so I'll hear you out.

Suga Foot:
what I meant by a mess, is that it seems like a lot of your melodies just come in off beat or at an awkward time.  And in your talkbox beat, at some points it seems like there is too much going on at once, and it's hard for the listener to focus on one main melody. 

Prolific:
About the only thing that doesn't fit as well..Is the talkbox because I removed most of it..I ain't new to producing just because I've only had a few post on this site...As for the talkboxing beat I knew when I posted it I'd have to touch up the my bassline and the synth melody so they work but I never put finished product on soundclick..Niggas will jack anything, I found out the hard way..

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