West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: funkstylz on December 10, 2002, 03:26:40 PM
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aight let's battle 20-30 lines
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dis cat DJ Lost comes up to me flashin his floss,
showing his bling bling, make a nigga think he can sing,
well i got 2 words , swing swing ,so much fo yo bling bling,
funkz upside ya head make them bells ring,
now how's this for a proposal,
grab every weapon at your disposal,
i got my rhymes, an u got a hose bro?
shit we playin wit 2 different flows yo,
i'm startin ta feel that this aint yo game,
my rhymes have past , come and will come again,
but gimme watchu got cuz i'm too fast to get caught,
i'ma bust like i'm runnin from the cops,
when i bust a nigga ask damn u tupac?,
fuck that shit, i'm too quik wit da glock to be named tupac,
1,2, 10, and watch that nigga da lost get dropped,
sirens and lights and next come the chalk,
now the funeral has come, an his girl's ridin new cock,
tears come from heaven but none from his flock,
2 weeks later his name won't ever be talked,
don't fuck with the funk cuz he tha mufuckin boss,
an if u step up on his territory u best pretend that u be 'lost',
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shit i got ur name wrong man i thought it was da lost lol i fixed it in my rap too
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funkstylz ill battle you after this ish
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I'll drop something later. I b Buzy
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aight assassin, and aight dj lost
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hurrry up! haha
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im sure they'll drop tomorrow mornin, they neva go on at night, just at schoo =)
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ah ya s'kew
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2 hours of internet use......yea its the shit
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lol
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Ya im posting my verse for are battle funkstylz
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during the time of my empire
there were people like u w/ no desire
you come 2 me begging and crying
Because you and your rhyme r dying
it's me that smack you upside your head
hit you so hard you bleeding red
I talk you to the ground
cause ur entertainment like bozoo the clown
you aint nothing but a little out cast
In messing with the best u cant last
I do what i do cause i'm the finest
so bow down to your highness
My girl rock all the bling bling
your girl says you need a bigger ding-a-ling
Contact your local police
cause im ready to release
in destroying u i can c your reaction
you and your rhymes Aint nothing but a distraction
It's Dj lost the only one
Once agian bow down cause you're done
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im voting for dj lost because his verse flowed much better and his punch's were better hitting, and didn't really enjoy your ryhme sceme from either of you though, but its all good, keep writin'
vote= djlost!
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i'm new and i like them both
my Vote Dj lost
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let's get some more votes in here first to 5
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well, both werent really good, but I see you both tryin so dont take my opinion as an offense yall. I agree wit votin on DJ Lost. his shit was better though funkstylz is showin more effort. but funk you should try expandin a bit, lose the simplistic scheme and work on some serious punchlines. I'm jus tryna help you homie, I started off like that once so I know how it is.
peace
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congrats djlost you won 3-0 ko
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kew thnx for the feedback illicit
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i want lost to post first next time he had 2 days on me to write this shit i had 25 minutes not even
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nobody said u had to post in 25 mins, do a rematch then
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heh s'kewl, i ain't gonna bitch bout it :P
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stop crying
i only work on it like an hour
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lol thats really funny, my battle verses seriously take 10 min tops
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yea mine and yers combined to post and finish, bout 30mins