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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on February 21, 2002, 04:12:48 AM

Title: Devastation,  jus some shit I wrote
Post by: 'Illicit' on February 21, 2002, 04:12:48 AM

i wrote this last night, it sparked up an idea, for a song hopefully.   rate it if ya can that way I know i can go on pursueing my thought of turning it into something valuable.


my point of view on this game goes beyond money and fame/
strain and pain got me detained, people hate n cheer my name/
heart in chains, im told I'm free, cant see improvement on the streets/
no authority is for real, politicians struggle to heal/
make no effort to help the poor, expect us to be mature/  
this world is insecure, impure too late for cure/        
devastation has occured, simple lyrics to open eyes/
if you fail to comprehend these lines, go back and study my rhymes/
I feel obliged to bring reality or at least a dose of sense/
intense feelings wrote down on paper with pencils sharpened from emotional stress/
battlefields cleared, freed my chest of immense grief in my head/
blessed sending out messages to ignorant youth hope they listen before Im dead/
fed your mind with words uttered by the soul i was givin by god/
lead you blind on a path in this world where you be livin in fraud/
i know god is the man to guide, but while im alive its up to me/
to make a change to the devastation in lifes piled up infamy/



peace, one love

Title: Re: Devastation,  jus some shit I wrote
Post by: KVB on February 21, 2002, 04:20:59 AM

Dope shit homie... keep it up.

Title: Re: Devastation,  jus some shit I wrote
Post by: DeaDSouLjaH on February 21, 2002, 05:43:49 AM

i really really liked this one from Illicit...it had my mind working.. keep postin shit like this homie..