West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: 'Illicit' on December 09, 2002, 08:01:01 AM
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aight I pulled you up a spot, cuz ToNe said he'd like to battle a bit later. so if you cool wit that holla.
12 bars, first to 5, 3 - KO. crew votes allowed, deadline: thursday
aight?
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uppin
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checkin' in
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I left my glock at home I wont need it for this bucket of shit//
whyd you sign up for testin and feelin the wratch of my intricate spits//
my delicate wit, murderous rhymes harsher than russian mafia massacres//
I prevail in any type of lyrical competition of bustin raps-at-ya//
you try to be "So Damn Hood" like crooked i//
but ya mindstate aint able to push a propa punchline//
you talk gats 'n scars in your raps 'n bars//
but ya better tie ya shoes cuz this foo be trippin hard//
change that name you got cuz you fa sho aint killin cats//
theres a thread called "Top Ten MC's" but where ya at?//
you jus got murdered theres no chance you'll ever take my title//
dig a ditch, dress as a priest and scare ya fam with another recital//
peace and no beef, jus lyrics but you know that dawg.
>>>EDIT: I last line: I wrote "fame" instead of "fam", I changed that.<<<
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Here we go
AUTOMATICK KILLAH
Bumped me up a spot cuz you couldn't handle tone//*
You trying to rap, but my rhymes got you like a mindless drone//
Ceeride phone-home, say goobye to shortty//
Shatter a bottle draw blood, wit a empty fortty//
Illcit couldn't beat me if my rhymes were as wack as dj lost//
You get eliminated from the battle, and death at any cost//
Now whos the boss?, say goodbye to this so called "vet"//
Now he playing punk cause are verses finally met//
Clash of the fists, threw the mists, leavin' scars and cists//
Automatick blastin' point blank field of perception//
You callin' up ya boyfriends talkin bout new ways of contraception//
Try'na get an erection, cuz my lyrics got you limp//(dead)
Makin 12 year old hoes, claimin he a pimp//
@ss@Ssin has offically murdered Illicit's reputation//
I started at the top, and then blew apart his foundation//
R.I.P ILLICIT
YOU WILL ALWAYS BE REMEMBERED FOR YOUR WACK RHYMES
*illicit made a list of 5 people to battle, i was number three but then got bumped to 2 becuz tone was busy
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thos battle was close.. and i dont think none of yall did your best..
vote: assassin for slightly better punchlines and wordplay
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but ya better tie ya shoes cuz this foo be trippin hard//
THAT ONE LINE KILLED IT
VOTE - ILLICIT
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1-1 uppin
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nice flow in both but assassin was stronger
Vote=Assassin
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Both very good verses, i felt assassin came a bit more personal and harder punches but felt both verses flowed well.
Vote - Assassin,
Very close battle =)
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3-1
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votes plz!
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Another honest vote lol...
Nice shit Illicit, but again your opponent managed to beat you basically because of the personals...I couldn't see too many lines directly attackin assassin, whereas he had sum nice disses which is why my vote goes to him. Still a nice verse though, good flow. Lyrically you were pretty equal, I'd have liked to see sum more multis or wordplay...nice battle, pretty close but assassin's personals got him my vote
VOTE = ASSASSIN
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aiight yall, thiz shit was really close.
Illicit, really good flow. Some good punchez, couple good metaz, and threw a few multis in there at tha beginning. Overall, a pretty good verse. I have seen better frum u, but still a solid spit.
Assassin, also a tight verse. good punchez, decent vocab, and a couple good personalz in thea. Good shit homie.
As far as tha personalz that everybodiez trippin of of, i only counted 2 from Assassin, and 1 from Illicit. So i dont see a big despairity between tha two. So that wont factor into mah votin. But ima hafta go wit Illicit on thiz one. Tha 2 were VERY close, but i jus seem tah feel Illicitz a lil bit more.
Good shit frum both..
Vote=Illicit
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4-2 uppin
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thos battle was close.. and i dont think none of yall did your best..
vote: assassin for slightly better punchlines and wordplay
i agree with i-o cee dawg u slippin...
this one goes to assassin
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thats it, 5-2 good battle illict