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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: SkillZ on September 04, 2003, 12:45:31 PM

Title: When Clouds Fall- "free"
Post by: SkillZ on September 04, 2003, 12:45:31 PM

Hell freezes-over aim any where from ya' knees-ta-shoulders // Pin point ya lungs, squezz-its-over... bring ah' hult an seize-ya'-souljazs // I'll clap-my-guns till I collaps-ya-lungs straps-undone I'll pull heat n' snap-ya-son // N dont let ya vest second-guess-my-guns, cause I'll leave on ya' chest where breast-press-ya'-lungs // Listen when the tounge-spray cause skillz sprung ta' leave ya' lungs-caved // Fuck weight... I got the will-for-ya'-death an I'll freeze ya' lungs with cold steel-to-ya'-chest // Let em' clap like pop guns I pop-some shoot till the shots-numb -, make ya' wonder where the dot-from... // Bullets I got-some I've shot-some what happen you got-dumb dont worry I'll open ya' mind when bullets ripp n' the shots-hmm // Shitin ya' pants when one followed by alot-come n' that spot-numb where you was shot-from...//

Jus' havin some fun

SkillZ Of Elite

Title: Re:When Clouds Fall- "free"
Post by: bez on September 04, 2003, 03:32:41 PM

one of the best keystyles I have read for a while man, dope shit.  Good to see your back too, I like reading your stuff man.

Title: Re:When Clouds Fall- "free"
Post by: |JEM|ILL| on September 04, 2003, 05:26:19 PM

Quote from: SkillZ on September 04, 2003, 12:45:31 PM

Hell freezes-over aim any where from ya' knees-ta-shoulders // Pin point ya lungs, squezz-its-over... bring ah' hult an seize-ya'-souljazs // I'll clap-my-guns till I collaps-ya-lungs straps-undone I'll pull heat n' snap-ya-son // N dont let ya vest second-guess-my-guns, cause I'll leave on ya' chest where breast-press-ya'-lungs // Listen when the tounge-spray cause skillz sprung ta' leave ya' lungs-caved // Fuck weight... I got the will-for-ya'-death an I'll freeze ya' lungs with cold steel-to-ya'-chest // Let em' clap like pop guns I pop-some shoot till the shots-numb -, make ya' wonder where the dot-from... // Bullets I got-some I've shot-some what happen you got-dumb dont worry I'll open ya' mind when bullets ripp n' the shots-hmm // Shitin ya' pants when one followed by alot-come n' that spot-numb where you was shot-from...//

Jus' havin some fun

SkillZ Of Elite

What up Homo...j/k Welcome back Skizzle

Atleast you aint lost ya flow, but ya rhyme scheme could switch it up and more vocab usage cuz it seems a lil menotynous but the flows nice...

Title: Re:When Clouds Fall- "free"
Post by: SkillZ on September 04, 2003, 08:12:09 PM

I'll have a better one come up soon called

The Skys Fallin- Should be hott this was jus' quick random shit i threw out for fun

Title: Re:When Clouds Fall- "free"
Post by: M Dogg™ on September 05, 2003, 06:54:21 AM

Good shit homie... I can't wait to see what you got next. Should be interesting.