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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Nat Turner-reincarnated on April 03, 2008, 06:02:15 PM
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12-20 bars
first to 3 votes
hey now i know, now eye know you all lip like superhead/
me and you in the same room, equal me cuffed up, facing the death penalty and you dead/
you smell that? yea you stepped in shit , when you said you was down to battle me/
call me the lyrical Hitler cuz when eye am done with you, only thing
that will be left is ashes and teeth/
no remorse, my punchlines will have you pissing blood for weeks/
your rhymes are pathetic like that banana fagget pretending to be me/
you probably go to sleep with a kobe bryant blow up doll and wearing his jersey/
kidnap your ass and throw out the ride doing 100 on the garden state parkway/
eye am a king like ron artest, eye am a man, you a bitch at a Laker game with
pom poms in your hands/
me and you can never be friends, the closest eye come to peace
is rippin off a mercedes benz emblem/
you a Baller? well eye would low bridge you while you tryin to rebound/
then walk all over you like A.I did to tyrone lou/
you fake, we the original hebrews/
beat you down then spin you on your head like a dreidel/
then stomp you out till your life flashes in front of you/
eye told you fuckin with me is fatal/
-NOTHING THE GOD CANT SOLVE
your move................
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man you were really upset about me punkin you like that, everybody laughin at your serious thoughts like they were my jokes
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man you were really upset about me punkin you like that, everybody laughin at your serious thoughts like they were my jokes
nigga your a clown you have no life.......thats why u desperately want to be me.... you only played yourself on the real you been lost....you cant be me get over it........ you will always be number 2 to me.........you cant beat me in anything you a loser get it......you will never ever ever be able to beat me in anything.... face it your a loser get that. eye am number 1 you are number 2
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man you were really upset about me punkin you like that, everybody laughin at your serious thoughts like they were my jokes
nigga your a clown you have no life.......thats why u desperately want to be me.... you only played yourself on the real you been lost....you cant be me get over it........ you will always be number 2 to me.........you cant beat me in anything you a loser get it......you will never ever ever be able to beat me in anything.... face it your a loser get that. eye am number 1 you are number 2
lol, i attack quick like a whirlwind, romance, like job and his imaginary girlfriend, you're number one, top seed buns, jailhouse fag, niggas called you hun.
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man you were really upset about me punkin you like that, everybody laughin at your serious thoughts like they were my jokes
nigga your a clown you have no life.......thats why u desperately want to be me.... you only played yourself on the real you been lost....you cant be me get over it........ you will always be number 2 to me.........you cant beat me in anything you a loser get it......you will never ever ever be able to beat me in anything.... face it your a loser get that. eye am number 1 you are number 2
lol, i attack quick like a whirlwind, romance, like job and his imaginary girlfriend, you're number one, top seed buns, jailhouse fag, niggas called you hun.
hahah your such a loser........... it is sooo obvious quick do yourself a favor and stop postin you just make you self look more of a loser
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the holocaust vs. slavery, i was in a gas chamber only to bust through
straight to take care of this job, you gettin lynched by a drunk jew
you a mutt too...wouldn't be surprised if bananas WAS you
and cherish your Latin roots, ese, it's something that you must do
but what's new? punk dude always hiding like the klux ku
or the ku klux you're too flux, so I adjust you
nigga, what you think? it's chiropractic rhyme structure
watch his-panic, cry busta, I'm the tragic spine buster
yea, I said his-panic, cuz you're a scary ass Mexican
thinkin you got roots in Africa, what happened to your parents then?
if one of them is black then the other one is hopeless
cuz you fake 5 percentin' when your surname is Gomez
Hotep!......Isn't that your favorite sayin?
This aint no reindeer games, but homie, you just faced a slayin'
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i gotta go wit nik on that one
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I'm sorry, even though Job's the dude, Now_I_Know straight up murdered this, hot damn. :o
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NIK gots my vote...
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hahaha wow........ why aint eye surprised
let me vote for that banana boy too and his vote goes for none other than now i know
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Ill rhymes, both of ya
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hahaha wow........ why aint eye surprised
let me vote for that banana boy too and his vote goes for none other than now i know
What does it matter?...I already won. LOL
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hahaha wow........ why aint eye surprised
let me vote for that banana boy too and his vote goes for none other than now i know
What does it matter?...I already won. LOL
all honest you really think you shit was better than mine?? on the real?? because eye sit back and analyze ya shit like none of it makes sense..... first off mexican and the DR no where near each other....... mexican and ese go together not dominican and ese....... second "if one of them is black the other one is hopeless" like wtf?? what kind of punchline is that ?? you tried to break down hispanic ( his-panic ) to use it as a metaphor but it made no sense. like nothin in there would have niggas surround us going like ""OOOHHHHHH shit" --------no crowd moving factor in ya shit..
good W though
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DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN..... i read the first dudes and i was like ok ok....not much flow and kinda wild on the line structure...but ok ok....then i read Now i KNOW and ...well......he KILLED IT...shit had me rolling up laughing....sick punches...witty...and good rhyme scheme.....
my vote easily goes to SCCIT THA SHIZNET lol....
eazzy
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hahaha wow........ why aint eye surprised
let me vote for that banana boy too and his vote goes for none other than now i know
What does it matter?...I already won. LOL
all honest you really think you shit was better than mine?? on the real?? because eye sit back and analyze ya shit like none of it makes sense..... first off mexican and the DR no where near each other....... mexican and ese go together not dominican and ese....... second "if one of them is black the other one is hopeless" like wtf?? what kind of punchline is that ?? you tried to break down hispanic ( his-panic ) to use it as a metaphor but it made no sense. like nothin in there would have niggas surround us going like ""OOOHHHHHH shit" --------no crowd moving factor in ya shit..
good W though
LOL...calm down dude, it's just a keystyle...and my little 2 minute key obviously murdered yours. Step up your rhyme structure and get some multis, then call me out when you've mastered all that...PeACe
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hahaha wow........ why aint eye surprised
let me vote for that banana boy too and his vote goes for none other than now i know
What does it matter?...I already won. LOL
all honest you really think you shit was better than mine?? on the real?? because eye sit back and analyze ya shit like none of it makes sense..... first off mexican and the DR no where near each other....... mexican and ese go together not dominican and ese....... second "if one of them is black the other one is hopeless" like wtf?? what kind of punchline is that ?? you tried to break down hispanic ( his-panic ) to use it as a metaphor but it made no sense. like nothin in there would have niggas surround us going like ""OOOHHHHHH shit" --------no crowd moving factor in ya shit..
good W though
LOL...calm down dude, it's just a keystyle...and my little 2 minute key obviously murdered yours. Step up your rhyme structure and get some multis, then call me out when you've mastered all that...PeACe
you still didnt answer my question........ these crackers dont know shit about battling ......like look at what u dropped analyzed that shit eye have no clue how niggas swearin you murder shit......... eye am scrathin my head..... and aint nobody a sore loser eye said good W...but can you answerr my question.....maybe its just me eye dont understand what a "keystyle" is............
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hahaha wow........ why aint eye surprised
let me vote for that banana boy too and his vote goes for none other than now i know
What does it matter?...I already won. LOL
all honest you really think you shit was better than mine?? on the real?? because eye sit back and analyze ya shit like none of it makes sense..... first off mexican and the DR no where near each other....... mexican and ese go together not dominican and ese....... second "if one of them is black the other one is hopeless" like wtf?? what kind of punchline is that ?? you tried to break down hispanic ( his-panic ) to use it as a metaphor but it made no sense. like nothin in there would have niggas surround us going like ""OOOHHHHHH shit" --------no crowd moving factor in ya shit..
good W though
LOL...calm down dude, it's just a keystyle...and my little 2 minute key obviously murdered yours. Step up your rhyme structure and get some multis, then call me out when you've mastered all that...PeACe
you still didnt answer my question........ these crackers dont know shit about battling ......like look at what u dropped analyzed that shit eye have no clue how niggas swearin you murder shit......... eye am scrathin my head..... and aint nobody a sore loser eye said good W...but can you answerr my question.....maybe its just me eye dont understand what a "keystyle" is............
To answer your question, yes, I honestly do think my shit was better than yours...LOL. That's why I posted it up. Can I come better? Of course I can..But I obviously didn't need to. Now close this thread...your bickering isn't gunna help the fact that you lost...PeACe
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sore loser is the popular term i think.
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Scicc the shit >>> that Black panthers wannabe all day long
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Peace...stay true... let me review your rhyme homie. Then review his and then vote. I'm an unbiased voter because you and NowIKnow are both my homies, so I don't really want to see either of ya'll lose.
12-20 bars
first to 3 votes
hey now i know, now eye know you all lip like superhead/
me and you in the same room, equal me cuffed up, facing the death penalty and you dead/
you smell that? yea you stepped in shit , when you said you was down to battle me/
call me the lyrical Hitler cuz when eye am done with you, only thing
that will be left is ashes and teeth/
no remorse, my punchlines will have you pissing blood for weeks/
You came out swinging and really established yourself, all powerful punches. +3
your rhymes are pathetic like that banana fagget pretending to be me/
you probably go to sleep with a kobe bryant blow up doll and wearing his jersey/
DOPE! Those were your two best lines. I love the personal disses/dubcc references, lol at the Banana and Kobe thing. +5
kidnap your ass and throw out the ride doing 100 on the garden state parkway/
eye am a king like ron artest, eye am a man, you a bitch at a Laker game with
pom poms in your hands/
not bad.. not great either -1
me and you can never be friends, the closest eye come to peace
is rippin off a mercedes benz emblem/
Damn.. that was ill homie... nice metaphor +2
you a Baller? well eye would low bridge you while you tryin to rebound/
then walk all over you like A.I did to tyrone lou/
you fake, we the original hebrews/
beat you down then spin you on your head like a dreidel/
then stomp you out till your life flashes in front of you/
eye told you fuckin with me is fatal/
-NOTHING THE GOD CANT SOLVE
your move................
You killed him at the end homie. You lose points cause your rhyme scheme was a little off. But you gain more points because of your references to being "origional hebrews" and keeping it righteous. +1
Props homie.. illest verse I've seen from you.
Total- 10 points
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Sup homie.. I know you already won the votes 3-0, but I really wanted to review this battle cause it's one of the better one's we've had in a while. So I will either vote for you and make you undisputed champ in this battle, or vote for him and add some ammo to his protest.
the holocaust vs. slavery, i was in a gas chamber only to bust through
Kind of a weak start... "bust through" sounded corny -2
straight to take care of this job, you gettin lynched by a drunk jew
you a mutt too...wouldn't be surprised if bananas WAS you
nice... love the dubcc references and wordplay +2.5
and cherish your Latin roots, ese, it's something that you must do
but what's new? punk dude always hiding like the klux ku
or the ku klux you're too flux, so I adjust you
nigga, what you think? it's chiropractic rhyme structure
watch his-panic, cry busta, I'm the tragic spine buster
Solid disses, even better rhyme scheme, but no big exclamation point +3
yea, I said his-panic, cuz you're a scary ass Mexican
thinkin you got roots in Africa, what happened to your parents then?
if one of them is black then the other one is hopeless
cuz you fake 5 percentin' when your surname is Gomez
You landed that punch solid. You set it all up and when you came with "Gomez" that was the exclamation point I was looking for. LOL, clever, funny shit homie. NowIKnow doing what he does best. +5
Hotep!......Isn't that your favorite sayin?
This aint no reindeer games, but homie, you just faced a slayin'
Didn't get where you were going with the "Ho-tep" thing. I know that's an Egyptian pharoah or something, but I didn't get where you were going with the reference. Weak finish, you lose points for that. -2
Nice verse, but I know you can do much better. I think you underestimated him, and you shouldn't have because you had the advantage of going second.
Final score = 6.5
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Job = 10 points
NowIKnow = 6.5
my vote= Job
(...NowIKnow officially won this battle because he already recieved three votes, but with NowIKnow being an OG at the forum and Job gettin hated on unjustly at the forum, I think the votes could have been biased. Peace.)
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Lol at you goin through all that. NIK won, fair and square.
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Lol at you goin through all that. NIK won, fair and square.
And I don't dispute that. NowIKnow did win fair and square. I just questioned if the votes might have been biased, but bottom line is NowIKnow won the battle officially. I'm not trying to take that away from him.
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"the only peace is when I rip off your mercedez benz eblem"- Job
"claimin to be 5 percenter when your last name is Gomez"- NowIKnow
..I will nominate these two for illest lines of the year in the awards thread in the keystyle section
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see that all eye am saying ....eye lost o fo sho thats cool but someone break that shit down ........you know what grabbed the fuck out your attention!!!!!!! these corny ass niggas like OH shit now i know killed it......nigga killed what........ he talkin on shit that dont make sense like eye said mexican and dominican long way from each other.............second you got spanish niggas, whites ( everlast is a 5 percenter), azreal etc)....so that whole gomez shit eye am like wtf!??!! nigga dont know what he talkin about. like eye still dont see it.............maybe eye dont overstand what a keystyle is.......eye just play an instrumental and write but it seems as if............a keystyle= just go line to line sayin the most outrageous and craziest shit and then make it rhyme at the end.
"if one of your parents is black the other is hopless" wtf??? where was the punch
"the klux ku or ku klux your too flux" again wtf eye dont get it
if anything the whole "getting lynched by a drunk jew" was a punch
and if you knew what you were talkin about in that paragraph about mexican, and exe maybe but thats it
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It's not like it's gotta make perfect sense, you get the jest of it, the idea of it.
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btw, Everlast is an orthodox Muslim, not a 5%
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btw, Everlast is an orthodox Muslim, not a 5%
nah everlast is godbody trustme
It's not like it's gotta make perfect sense, you get the jest of it, the idea of it.
then eye guess that whats the problem, cuz when niggas freestyling its over the dome but non the less you still tryin to come correct............so thats how ya do on here??..............thats why niggas voted for that fillapino nigga, who went like get gwop, bust glock, tick tock shit and ya niggas went crazy over that.............. thats simple shit
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btw, Everlast is an orthodox Muslim, not a 5%
nah everlast is godbody trustme
I will post an article by him on Monday or Tuesday when I'm on my home pc to prove it of his story of how he came to orthodox Islam.
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btw, Everlast is an orthodox Muslim, not a 5%
nah everlast is godbody trustme
I will post an article by him on Monday or Tuesday when I'm on my home pc to prove it of his story of how he came to orthodox Islam.
aiite
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I mean put it this way, when niggas is battling on the streets, you hear the punches, the wordplay and how they flowing. Ain't nobody really gonna sit there and correct a nigga cuz he ain't comin' proper. Ya know?
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I mean put it this way, when niggas is battling on the streets, you hear the punches, the wordplay and how they flowing. Ain't nobody really gonna sit there and correct a nigga cuz he ain't comin' proper. Ya know?
so what is the whole point of this? if niggas aint coming correct?? to just make a whole bunch of mumble, jumble bullshit basura, make it rhyme at the end........... then have simple ass niggas be like OH SHIT he killed it........like eye am not overstanding this.
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Didn't get where you were going with the "Ho-tep" thing. I know that's an Egyptian pharoah or something, but I didn't get where you were going with the reference. Weak finish, you lose points for that. -2
"Hotep" is something he always says after he thinks he schooled someone...either way, thanks for the breakdown, homie...PeACe
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I mean put it this way, when niggas is battling on the streets, you hear the punches, the wordplay and how they flowing. Ain't nobody really gonna sit there and correct a nigga cuz he ain't comin' proper. Ya know?
so what is the whole point of this? if niggas aint coming correct?? to just make a whole bunch of mumble, jumble bullshit basura, make it rhyme at the end........... then have simple ass niggas be like OH SHIT he killed it........like eye am not overstanding this.
LOL...stop being a sore loser. Everything I said made sense. You're just mad cuz I typed my shit out in half a minute, while you probably sat all night tryna come "correct", and still lost...
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Didn't get where you were going with the "Ho-tep" thing. I know that's an Egyptian pharoah or something, but I didn't get where you were going with the reference. Weak finish, you lose points for that. -2
"Hotep" is something he always says after he thinks he schooled someone...either way, thanks for the breakdown, homie...PeACe
wrong again.........makin shit up hotep is used as peace..... like how you becoming up with this shit.............. eye use it when eye think eye schooled someone???
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Didn't get where you were going with the "Ho-tep" thing. I know that's an Egyptian pharoah or something, but I didn't get where you were going with the reference. Weak finish, you lose points for that. -2
"Hotep" is something he always says after he thinks he schooled someone...either way, thanks for the breakdown, homie...PeACe
wrong again.........makin shit up hotep is used as peace..... like how you becoming up with this shit.............. eye use it when eye think eye schooled someone???
whatever, it's one of your favorite sayings...ive just seen you say hotep to many people on this board to end a convo, so I assumed it was your way of saying "owned" or some shit...PeACe
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I mean put it this way, when niggas is battling on the streets, you hear the punches, the wordplay and how they flowing. Ain't nobody really gonna sit there and correct a nigga cuz he ain't comin' proper. Ya know?
so what is the whole point of this? if niggas aint coming correct?? to just make a whole bunch of mumble, jumble bullshit basura, make it rhyme at the end........... then have simple ass niggas be like OH SHIT he killed it........like eye am not overstanding this.
LOL...stop being a sore loser. Everything I said made sense. You're just mad cuz I typed my shit out in half a minute, while you probably sat all night tryna come "correct", and still lost...
nigga please it took you 2mins..... eye say it took me 4 or 5min so what??? how you going to say everything u said make sense ...........BREAK IT DOWN REAL QUICK THEN!!!!!!!!!!!! straight off the BACK DOMINICAN REPUBLIC AND MEXICO...yea that makes sense.......... it the whole vibes eye get from this is to just make up mumble , jumble and niggas will say OH SHIT YOU KILLED IT!!!!!!! eye get it now
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I mean put it this way, when niggas is battling on the streets, you hear the punches, the wordplay and how they flowing. Ain't nobody really gonna sit there and correct a nigga cuz he ain't comin' proper. Ya know?
so what is the whole point of this? if niggas aint coming correct?? to just make a whole bunch of mumble, jumble bullshit basura, make it rhyme at the end........... then have simple ass niggas be like OH SHIT he killed it........like eye am not overstanding this.
Yo, your shit didn't even flow. Before even comin' correct, you gotta have a structured rhyme scheme. Otherwise how a nigga gon read it?
I can understand where you're comin' from but come on nigga..
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I mean put it this way, when niggas is battling on the streets, you hear the punches, the wordplay and how they flowing. Ain't nobody really gonna sit there and correct a nigga cuz he ain't comin' proper. Ya know?
so what is the whole point of this? if niggas aint coming correct?? to just make a whole bunch of mumble, jumble bullshit basura, make it rhyme at the end........... then have simple ass niggas be like OH SHIT he killed it........like eye am not overstanding this.
Yo, your shit didn't even flow. Before even comin' correct, you gotta have a structured rhyme scheme. Otherwise how a nigga gon read it?
I can understand where you're comin' from but come on nigga..
eye come to the conclusion ya niggas dont know shit on the real........... ya must've been here for a long time and battling each other and got used to this funny style ya niggas claim is sooo fuckin great. but ya do you
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you probably go to sleep with a kobe bryant blow up doll and wearing his jersey/
kidnap your ass and throw out the ride doing 100 on the garden state parkway/
eye am a king like ron artest, eye am a man, you a bitch at a Laker game with
pom poms in your hands/
me and you can never be friends, the closest eye come to peace
is rippin off a mercedes benz emblem/
you a Baller? well eye would low bridge you while you tryin to rebound/
then walk all over you like A.I did to tyrone lou/
you fake, we the original hebrews/
beat you down then spin you on your head like a dreidel/
then stomp you out till your life flashes in front of you/
eye told you fuckin with me is fatal/
Maybe I'm reading wrong but I'm goin' by '/' to end ya bar.
Now_I_Know's went..
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He had structure homie. A battle in the hood nigga, what we want to hear? Punches with personals, a good flow, tight rhymes. Now_I_Know had more of that.
Homie, it's not a funny style, there's a whole punch of styles a nigga can rap or in this case 'keystyle' in, nigga, Now_I_Know came with it.
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bryans analysis was biased though because he wants to be jobs friend. I'm the only non biased shit ehre because i think flaimin maimon and danny are both full of shit and suffer from megalomania, but lyrically, elior's verse did flow nicer and had better stings, so im goin with him.
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bryans analysis was biased though because he wants to be jobs friend. I'm the only non biased shit ehre because i think flaimin maimon and danny are both full of shit and suffer from megalomania, but lyrically, elior's verse did flow nicer and had better stings, so im goin with him.
wrong again... your always speaking falsehood whenever you say my name. I'm tighter with NIK than I am Job, because NIK and I know each other personally and have hung out in real life. So if I was going to be bias and vote for anybody it would be NIK. And Job corrected me when I associated him with Islam the other day... so you can't even say I just voted for him cause he's down with Islam, because he told me he is not.
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bryans analysis was biased though because he wants to be jobs friend. I'm the only non biased shit ehre because i think flaimin maimon and danny are both full of shit and suffer from megalomania, but lyrically, elior's verse did flow nicer and had better stings, so im goin with him.
wrong again... your always speaking falsehood whenever you say my name. I'm tighter with NIK than I am Job, because NIK and I know each other personally and have hung out in real life. So if I was going to be bias and vote for anybody it would be NIK. And Job corrected me when I associated him with Islam the other day... so you can't even say I just voted for him cause he's down with Islam, because he told me he is not.
eye only speak the truth bry guy. and eye said you voted for him because he is black, not muslim. that is the correct part.
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eye only speak the truth bry guy. and eye said you voted for him because he is black, not muslim. that is the correct part.
If I voted for him because he is black then how do you explain all the black people I have voted against at this forum... Timelock, Sikotic, Maxicsn, Haterats, Quiettruth, etc.
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LOL@all this
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i'm black but i aint gon be biased or nuttin and i gotta say NIK won, his shit was not great if im honest but it flowed and had more of an effect in the little verse. Job started good but it got weak as it went on and the flow was nowhere near the end. I gotta say JOB was more personal as in seemed more angry in his verse but it was obvious at the moment NIK is on another level. JOB dont trip homie, u lost but just keep working on it and you will be aight.
pz
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i'm black but i aint gon be biased or nuttin and i gotta say NIK won, his shit was not great if im honest but it flowed and had more of an effect in the little verse. Job started good but it got weak as it went on and the flow was nowhere near the end. I gotta say JOB was more personal as in seemed more angry in his verse but it was obvious at the moment NIK is on another level. JOB dont trip homie, u lost but just keep working on it and you will be aight.
pz
fo sho good lookin for breakin it down like that..........