West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: .:R-E-L:. on July 26, 2002, 03:14:22 PM
-
i noticed u had the lightweight title.....
i wanted 2 step up for it.....
1)First to 5
2)3-0(KO)
3)Max. 20 bars
Get ur Verse in ASAP
-
Iight... You can have a shot... Seeing as you are offerin me out, i say you spit first, as im kinda busy, so as soon as you have spit i will spit.. iight homie! ;)
Peace tha don
-
Call me "Don Corleone" or just better yet, Tha "Godfather"//
Just boring, I store u away in my "cabinet" just like a "larder"//
Im "scoring", call me "Brazil", Ur "Germany", u cant "defend it" so call a charter//
Im so "hot", u cant put me out wit water, im "sunburnt" worse than a desert-sun scorcher//
Or "finer" than a new-born son's "nurser" (nurse) but "fiercer" than an "abusive-dad"//
My rhymes are more elusive than u'll ever have, dont com here with that weaker-cheap-shit//
Just call me the "grim-reaper" or just "bleap-it"//
Lemme stick it on, "Parental Advisory Explicit Content" cuz ima "throat-splitter" that "curses"//
I have Exceptional-Ability-Im Illicit-And On It plus i gloat-over-killers w/ extreme surges//
I have the urges to be the "Undertaker" and "sell" u ur own caskit//
Ur name is "Michael Jackson", the "Child-Molester", and like ur small dick, it fits it//
Believe it and fray all the ends cuz ur shit has to many errors, to many mistakes//
Ur rhymes are lighter than feathers, but i finish u quikly like a "fat ass" eating "steaks"//
-
Your receiving my lyrical blows at a high ~ velocity ~
Impacting on your manufactured style, causing pure ~ intoxicty ~
Without hesitation remove your profile of ~ existence ~
Cause you to short circuit quicker than a wire overloadin with ~ resistance ~
Fuckin maintain, the limelight, not quick enough to ~ steel it ~
Refrain from pure annihalation, breeze through, what you take, i ~ retreive it ~
Style is non-corrosive, like mistakin an acid for an ~ alkali ~
I rebound your lyrics with enough venom, to cause a chemical reaction an ~ nuetralise ~
Wishing you could switch ~ brains ~, i overtake you at full throttle, you'd better not ~ switch lanes ~
Clean up your style, i'll pin point your errors an give an ~ evaluation ~
Coz im tha don, so high up, your lyrics loose co-ordination, and reflect in to different ~ directions ~
Direct attacking, leavin you no ammo to offend wit, wouldnt of made it easier to win, even under the name of ~ illicit ~
Leavin the scene, with people astonished at my brutal ass whippin, causin people to ~ commemorate ~
Expect no less from tha wannabe ~ illicit ~ when your style is so low in offense, it cant ~ fluctuate ~
Infectious with harmless ~ curses ~ you got more chance of offendin me with ya profile pic, than with ya 2 second ~ verses ~
Your shit scared of my reply, your havin to fight for ~ survival ~ your as harmless as Princess Diana, ~ dead on arrival ~
:P VOTES NEEDED, AND WOULD BE APPREICIATED!
-
votes r needed
-
CMON...this is fo a title....
VOTES!!
-
I gotta give an honest vote...I give R-E-L a loss and The Don a victory...Both were real dope with a lot of punch's but the rhyme structure's dont seem too good...
-
Yeah this was close, but i think Don got this one, his rhyme was more complex n 'advanced' than RELs, n it flowed better, peace
vote - don
-{bLaDe}
-
Three vets vote, tight. It's a K.O., the champ got this one. Hope to see both though elevate to heavyweight status soon.
-
Thanx for votin guys, i am grateful.. welll REL a 3-0 K0 unlucky man.... well i will be waitin on my next challenge!
Peace ya'll ;)
Tha Don
-
I vote for the Don... Not because I have beef, tension, or strife with R.E.L., not because I have favoritism, bias, or friendship with Don... but because Don's verse was the product of a highly literal and imaginative mind, and because Don's verse provided us with a more schooled and thought out rhyme scheme.
Vote= Don
-
Thanx people... so now its 4-0... lol... well nice battling... who's up for it next?
Peace -- Tha Don
-
lol yall weeeaaak like 7 days
-
7 days? ??? ???
-
7 days? ??? ???
it was a metaphor, lol
good battle
-
Oh yea... lol.. now i see it!
Yea good battle! Cya round ;)
Peace -- Tha Don