West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Sanford - V. President of the Dangerous Crew Movement on December 11, 2006, 12:12:20 PM
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this girl that my cousin likes had in her description:
Girls--------------( ME>>JANICE)
-----------are like apples------
- ------on trees. The best ones-----
-----are at the top of the tree.-----
---The boys dont want to reach---
--for the good ones because they--
-r afraid of falling and getting hurt.-
-Instead, they get the rotten apples-
from the ground that arent as good,
but easy. So the apples up top think
something wrong w/ them when in
-reality they're amazing. They just--
---have to wait for the right boy to
---- come along, the one who's-
----------- brave enough to-----
---------------climb all---------
---------------the way--------
--------------to the top------- -
-------------of the tree.---------
and then i wrote a poem for my cousin to give her:
I must agree, you are at the top of the tree,
Your beauty so supreme, that I must go on and proceed,
To tell you your smile is so pretty that it is hard to believe,
That nobody has the key to call you their queen, but only in their dreams.
But don't you see? Its me, sitting at the top too,
You probably didn't have a clue, because I'm in the other tree besides you.
Please don't let them bottom apple fake dudes confuse you to conclude,
That all are fools, when I'm a man who only speaks as what I see as true.
I hope I wasn't rude for replying to your description without permission,
But your beauty sparked my pen to write so you can read aloud and listen,
To a rhyme that sparks the mind to confide, As if you were to open your eyes for the very first time.
Because my pride challenges me to always refine to recognize,
A crime for anyone to deny, your pretty smile that no other can supply.
Even more of a surprise for everyone not to give you a dyme, Of course I will, because I won't lie,
Thats why they call me Genuine.(gen-u-wine)
that last word "Genuine" is my cousins user name. felt bad for the nigga cause pussy is scarce to him, so i took it upon myself to help him out. ;)
so tell me what you think!?! Wet panties or just panties? :)
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I'm impressed. Real impressed. Good job homie. That was tight as hell.
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I'm impressed. Real impressed. Good job homie. That was tight as hell.
always appreciate the feed nigga!
props! 8)
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Real Nice...
DYNAMIC
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Real Nice...
DYNAMIC
props homie! 8)
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nice job man, especially the last few lines
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nice job man, especially the last few lines
props man! 8)
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nice one, propz
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Damn, that's GREAT.Props man, I really enjoyed reading that 8)
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Damn, that's GREAT.Props man, I really enjoyed reading that 8)
props man! imma write a verse for a Dangerous Crew song...i want to get feedback from you when i drop it because i know you listen to that shit just as me! ;D
8)
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Damn, that's GREAT.Props man, I really enjoyed reading that 8)
props man! imma write a verse for a Dangerous Crew song...i want to get feedback from you when i drop it because i know you listen to that shit just as me! ;D
8)
;D You know I got you man.You're gonna post it here, right?In the keystyle section?
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Damn, that's GREAT.Props man, I really enjoyed reading that 8)
props man! imma write a verse for a Dangerous Crew song...i want to get feedback from you when i drop it because i know you listen to that shit just as me! ;D
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;D You know I got you man.You're gonna post it here, right?In the keystyle section?
yup! ill pm you when im done...i havnt started on it yet though...ill proly have it in a couple of dayz or so. 8)
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you can post it on dubcc, would be cool
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^not a bad idea. ;D
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Dogg Imma say this to my girl is it coo with you?
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Dogg Imma say this to my girl is it coo with you?
ofcourse man! thats why we known for the game! us BAY cats help each other out to achieve the level of a "MAC." 8)
let me know if she has a sister. ;D
:)