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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: ChildOfMuthaNature on November 09, 2002, 06:05:59 AM

Title: A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: ChildOfMuthaNature on November 09, 2002, 06:05:59 AM

Less than a man, but way passed a baby, it's the Child of Mutha Nature, pleading for da world to save me/
Maybe in time, this life we know as crooked line, of positives and negatives, will have no need, for the sedatives.
I mean all this war and killing, the shit's kinda repetitive, and what kinda life is that for the-world-ta-live/
have u ever asked a crack head why they put the pipe to their head, ever ask a drunk... when he's was sober what he thunk, ever ask an abuse wife why she put up with the thumps and da bumps/
usually the reply... still leave u asking why, and u know that ain't no lie, what makes the store clerks so nervous they say "HURRY UP AND BUY!"/
What make's the world to some not worth another chance, suicidal beings always ready in a jumping stance/
Whatever happened, why has happiness been forgotten, replaced in hearts a feeling that's rotten/
let's not fall into this pit so deep, let's get a grip on life and steer it clear from the ills and the trife/
so we can see a better day and a better way for the future life/

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: Kill on November 09, 2002, 06:52:17 AM

I felt most of it, keep spittin shit like this homie

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: ChildOfMuthaNature on November 09, 2002, 08:44:05 AM

thanx..man

i'll keep doing my thing

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: Pillow on November 10, 2002, 10:06:12 PM

damn dog that was tite, prolly the best i have seen u drop, keep postin more shit like that, thats what we need up in here

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: Maestro Minded on November 11, 2002, 02:14:27 AM

thats some nice shit right there.. always good to read some rhymes with deep...

i definatly felt most of it, specially the second half of the rhyme

continue to bring that shit to us..

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: ToNe1904 on November 11, 2002, 06:03:59 PM

damn, once again....real deep shit. Keep bringin tha real shit to tha board. Hallf of Mirrors mixed wit Keystyle  ;)

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: ChildOfMuthaNature on November 13, 2002, 07:58:13 AM

thanx yall 8)

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: da_notorious_mack on November 16, 2002, 04:47:13 AM

damn.....this was nice...probably the second best rhyme ive seen from you....the ther was the mystic cycle or summat......btw dope subject mattwer as always

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: Reef on November 16, 2002, 12:23:42 PM

Quote from: ToNe1904 on November 11, 2002, 06:03:59 PM

Hall of Mirrors mixed wit Keystyle  ;)

Word.

Dope subject man, the rhyme was tight.. The whole concept and the way it was put 2getha really worked well.. Keep spittin!

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: bez on November 16, 2002, 12:33:11 PM

dope ness mate, very nice, original.  

Title: Re:A Plead To The World (freestyle)
Post by: soul_assassin on November 27, 2002, 07:45:46 PM

yeah that shit was pretty good, i understood all of it and knew what it meant.