Very nice, looks like you forgot your last line though or something.. I'm getting an unfinished vibe, did you forget a line?
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//
c'mon everyone drop a vote on this shit..
thanks to yall who voted but then again.. 7 votes win and its pretty even right now..
maestro i think we should allow kru votin.. holla @ me.. we can decide who can vote on each kru if u wanna.. im just thinkin its gonna be hard to get votes..
either way is coo.. just a suggestion to hurry it up..
pZ
damn, this is what a hevyweight battle should be
i-bo - came dope as usal, tight all around, that lyrical part was sick, altho i didn't like layout
sin - imo sin had what it took to win. he came with a stright battle verse that had much harder personal punches then i-bo, also had a better multis
vote - sinister
I count 3 personals for Maestro, 1 for Sin. I don't count Maestro's first bar, maybe because I don't completely understand it, and he isn't really getting at him. The other 3 in the personal column are definitely personals tho. All I got for Sin is the asian line, maybe I just don't understand the other personals, if they are there.
Edit: if you really push it, you could count the swedish president line, but as maestro pointed out, it doesn't even make sense.
Maybe I'm wrong, or maybe others are, but the way I determine a personal is if you can use the line against someone else. That, and it has to actually insult the person. So to be a personal, it must be a line that can only be used on this particular person, and it has to insult. Am I wrong in my definition?
He had another Swede line in there, but it didn't hit for me, so I don't count it. I didn't count the President one, because it was incorrect! The asian one was kind of pushing it, but it was 'personal' because he could only really use it against you.
damn, this is what a hevyweight battle should be
i-bo - came dope as usal, tight all around, that lyrical part was sick, altho i didn't like layout
sin - imo sin had what it took to win. he came with a stright battle verse that had much harder personal punches then i-bo, also had a better multis
vote - sinister
cool
show me sinisters "better personals", not intending to start a beef, but as far as i can see, he didnt have many personals at all
i mean... i can stand loosing a match, but the causes that have been given here, it just pisses me off
im too complex
im using greek words (even though lyrical hiphop basicly is based on latin and greek words, such as syllables, metaphors etc)
i have bad flow (WTF??)
i have bad personals (even though sin had like 1 of them)
i have a bad layout (WTF??)
Sin had better personals (2xWTF??)
^^all that sounds like BULLSHIT... i just had to say that, im not the only one to think that
keep the vote(s) coming (even though its predictable were this battle is going)
~I-aint-seein-how you challenge me, I talked to overseer, my-cleavin's-allowed, U decomposin already, all I wanna hear from you is bye-Im-leavin-now//
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//
~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
~Push ya throne-back-tah-jersey, the 2nd exhibition of Cloud 9 ownage, Tones-attack-irks-me, even then I wont-lack-tha-mercy to laugh and watch you get thrown-back like mah-jersey//
damn, this is what a hevyweight battle should be
i-bo - came dope as usal, tight all around, that lyrical part was sick, altho i didn't like layout
sin - imo sin had what it took to win. he came with a stright battle verse that had much harder personal punches then i-bo, also had a better multis
vote - sinister
cool
show me sinisters "better personals", not intending to start a beef, but as far as i can see, he didnt have many personals at all
i mean... i can stand loosing a match, but the causes that have been given here, it just pisses me off
im too complex
im using greek words (even though lyrical hiphop basicly is based on latin and greek words, such as syllables, metaphors etc)
i have bad flow (WTF??)
i have bad personals (even though sin had like 1 of them)
i have a bad layout (WTF??)
Sin had better personals (2xWTF??)
^^all that sounds like BULLSHIT... i just had to say that, im not the only one to think that
keep the vote(s) coming (even though its predictable were this battle is going)
god damn, you always bitch...~I-aint-seein-how you challenge me, I talked to overseer, my-cleavin's-allowed, U decomposin already, all I wanna hear from you is bye-Im-leavin-now//
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//
~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
~Push ya throne-back-tah-jersey, the 2nd exhibition of Cloud 9 ownage, Tones-attack-irks-me, even then I wont-lack-tha-mercy to laugh and watch you get thrown-back like mah-jersey//
sin also had harder punches
god damn, you always bitch...
~I-aint-seein-how you challenge me, I talked to overseer, my-cleavin's-allowed, U decomposin already, all I wanna hear from you is bye-Im-leavin-now//aight.. maestro basically challenged me.. he said that i was the first person he was gonna battle.. bye im leavin now is referring to him bein the first guy on here and his time is up..
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//first of all, i didnt know sweden had a 'king' and not a president, even so tell me king wouldnt be easier to rhyme with president in the same bars.. and maestro is always makin threads bashin USA in TOT
~All cuz I deciphered ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//aight, if yall listened to 'sit back relax' like i said in the beginning you would know that maestro has a heavy african accent, that where speech impediments come from.. was yall wondering why PHENOM dont rhyme with VENOM
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//maybe im the only one who remembers his thread entitled 'maestro's resurrection'??
~Visual reached, I found-another-queer, U just lucky I cant 'find it in me' to end-ya-career, but still able to round-up-ya-fear, ass rape you and mend-up-ya-rear//end ya career.. maestro is the only cat on here that actually has a career doin the real shit in audio..
~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//HELLO who other than tone has participated in 50 PLUS BATTLES.. plus the swedish roads
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//kru bashin..
~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]i already made an explanantion for this one.. where is sweden? NORTHEAST of usa.. rest hopefully you can figure out..
~ Sin's like a bad version of Maestro, with a "beta-rhyming-kit" - equipped with punches, more patterned than "zeta-claiming-six"//how exactly is that a personal, calling me a bad version of him? throwin my name in there dont make it personal..
~ ~ Running & hiding, unaware of my "masses-vital-range" - he's making "history" by bein a part of the "fastest-title-change"//he aint hittin me.. he's hittin the title
~ ~ Claiming multis? don’t fool yourself with "three-syllables-rhymes" - check my logs to learn to spit "real-flammable-mines"//ok punch but do i really use 3 syllable rhymes? my last 3 verses i had at least one bar with 7 or 8 syllables..
~ ~ Its funny the way you're forced to "rip-styles" to "catch-a-win" - I "snatch-ya-chin", throwin you away like "garbage", just to "smack-ya-bin"//
aiight, good battle yall...i just went over that..
Personals-Maestro
Flow-Maestroyeah agreeable..
Vocab-Maestroquestionable.. maestro may have used good vocab but that was all outside the multis
Metas-Drawdont feel like goin over that right now..
Wordplay-Drawditto
Multies-Maestrok that some wack shit.. in english.. (sorry maestro) half of his shit didnt rhyme.. plus he used about 2 multis a bar, mine was about 3 and alot of bars it carried over.. i know you look for the quality of the multis tone but cmon..
im not one to bitch but here it is.. i have 0 personals?~I-aint-seein-how you challenge me, I talked to overseer, my-cleavin's-allowed, U decomposin already, all I wanna hear from you is bye-Im-leavin-now//aight.. maestro basically challenged me.. he said that i was the first person he was gonna battle.. bye im leavin now is referring to him bein the first guy on here and his time is up..~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//first of all, i didnt know sweden had a 'king' and not a president, even so tell me king wouldnt be easier to rhyme with president in the same bars.. and maestro is always makin threads bashin USA in TOT~All cuz I deciphered ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//aight, if yall listened to 'sit back relax' like i said in the beginning you would know that maestro has a heavy african accent, that where speech impediments come from.. was yall wondering why PHENOM dont rhyme with VENOM~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//maybe im the only one who remembers his thread entitled 'maestro's resurrection'??~Visual reached, I found-another-queer, U just lucky I cant 'find it in me' to end-ya-career, but still able to round-up-ya-fear, ass rape you and mend-up-ya-rear//end ya career.. maestro is the only cat on here that actually has a career doin the real shit in audio..~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//HELLO who other than tone has participated in 50 PLUS BATTLES.. plus the swedish roads~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//kru bashin..~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]i already made an explanantion for this one.. where is sweden? NORTHEAST of usa.. rest hopefully you can figure out..
sorry if i dont label every aspect in my verse
~~
ok.. maestros personals?~ Sin's like a bad version of Maestro, with a "beta-rhyming-kit" - equipped with punches, more patterned than "zeta-claiming-six"//how exactly is that a personal, calling me a bad version of him? throwin my name in there dont make it personal..~ ~ Running & hiding, unaware of my "masses-vital-range" - he's making "history" by bein a part of the "fastest-title-change"//he aint hittin me.. he's hittin the title~ ~ Claiming multis? don’t fool yourself with "three-syllables-rhymes" - check my logs to learn to spit "real-flammable-mines"//ok punch but do i really use 3 syllable rhymes? my last 3 verses i had at least one bar with 7 or 8 syllables..~ ~ Its funny the way you're forced to "rip-styles" to "catch-a-win" - I "snatch-ya-chin", throwin you away like "garbage", just to "smack-ya-bin"//
if my rippin styles counts as a personal.. then so be it.. 1
~~aiight, good battle yall...i just went over that..
Personals-MaestroFlow-Maestroyeah agreeable..Vocab-Maestroquestionable.. maestro may have used good vocab but that was all outside the multisMetas-Drawdont feel like goin over that right now..Wordplay-DrawdittoMulties-Maestrok that some wack shit.. in english.. (sorry maestro) half of his shit didnt rhyme.. plus he used about 2 multis a bar, mine was about 3 and alot of bars it carried over.. i know you look for the quality of the multis tone but cmon..
~~
i know this aint the best shit i dropped.. actually my internet went down that night, i went to the office (halfway across town) was down there too.. then came back cuz it was up again..
also i have lil scratch sheets where i write down random punches.. i left out alot of good personal punches on maestro.. e.g. only time you spittin venom is after suckin off poisonous-dicks.. but in the scramble i forgot about that.. thats my fault im just lettin ya know what up..
aight i just saw the last vote..
a big FUCK YOU to everyone who voted for maestro cuz obviously DONT KNOW SHIT about this..
yall can diss me.. yall can try and bash me.. but fuck that.. this a bunch of fuckin dickridin muthafuckaz and funny thing is that when i dropped my best.. tone didnt reply.. and fuckin dickridin happened with timelock and maestro when the verses look even..
FUCK YALL AND FUCK CLOUD 9.. all yall gon hear from me again..
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//first of all, i didnt know sweden had a 'king' and not a president, even so tell me king wouldnt be easier to rhyme with president in the same bars.. and maestro is always makin threads bashin USA in TOT
~All cuz I decipheblack ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//aight, if yall listened to 'sit back relax' like i said in the beginning you would know that maestro has a heavy african accent, that where speech impediments come from.. was yall wondering why PHENOM dont rhyme with VENOM
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//maybe im the only one who remembers his thread entitled 'maestro's resurrection'??
~Visual reached, I found-another-queer, U just lucky I cant 'find it in me' to end-ya-career, but still able to round-up-ya-fear, ass rape you and mend-up-ya-rear//end ya career.. maestro is the only cat on here that actually has a career doin the real shit in audio..
~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//HELLO who other than tone has participated in 50 PLUS BATTLES.. plus the swedish roads
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//kru bashin..
~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]i already made an explanantion for this one.. where is sweden? NORTHEAST of usa.. rest hopefully you can figure out..
lol.. i'll pretend like i didnt even see that shit
lol.. i'll pretend like i didnt even see that shit
and waht happened to all your 'personals' what happened to tones vote.. what happened to the fact that its kinda weird that you retire for about a year and only come at me with 1 personal AFTER I JUST BATTLED FOR THE TITLE AND THE CUP.. fuk yall dont see the big fuckin picture..
ima take a lil break from this thread.. FEEDBACK WELCOME
lemme hear what yal think
First Off Ya Both Where Hardcore.
Rate At 8.9
Post On Maestro
I Liked The Format If I Where To Bit Of Someone Post It Would Be Yours
"Personals" This Part Was Cool Cause It Started Right To Tha Point.
"Lyrical" Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"
{~Punchez~} They Where Hardhitting
{~Outro~} Nice And To Tha Point
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Maestro: Post
{~Personals~}
~ Sin’s like a bad version of Maestro, with a "beta-rhyming-kit" - equipped with punches, more patterned than "zeta-claiming-six"// *1
~ Running & hiding, unaware of my "masses-vital-range" - he's making "history" by bein a part of the "fastest-title-change"// *2
~ Claiming multis? don’t fool yourself with "three-syllables-rhymes" - check my logs to learn to spit "real-flammable-mines"// (mines as in landmines) *3
~ Its funny the way you're forced to "rip-styles" to "catch-a-win" - I "snatch-ya-chin", throwin you away like "garbage", just to "smack-ya-bin"//*4
{~Lyrical~}
~ Bringing more "heat" than Miami when sending "conduction-codes" - hacking his brain like Worm.Blaster, toggling "destruction-modes"//
~ 'Blinding his rhymes', he cant see me, like he "met-invisible-man - telepathically, infiltratin infrastructures, to rip his "meta-physical-can"//
~ I "let-my-impeccable-plan", rip his 'face of' quicker than "Nicolas-Cage" - kickin his ass off a plane, like watching "Icarus'-staged"// *5
~ My "intellectual-forces" "with-impeccable-courses" - makes him 'gallop of the track' like "incompatible-horses"//
{~Punchez~}
~ Racing towards each over, Sin avoids "the-collision-course" - cuz even with an army, he couldn’t stop my "de-molition-force"//
~ Bars way "above" his level when Maestro’s aiming "meta-forces" - killing Sin rawer than TX with deadly "meta-morphic"// *6
~ I'll "let-tha-loss-hit" like iron bricks, "dipped-in-venom" - even if he were Copperfield, he couldn’t "trick-this-phenom"//
~ Only way he's "above" me is when "accepting-my-uppercut" - i could come half assed on this battle, still "affecting-this-fuckin-nut"//
{~Outro~}
~ Sin be "crawlin" like a coward ,when Maestro's "extracting-his-spine"//
~ Causing more chaos than turbulences, when "inflicting-these-crimes"//
~ Giving him a 'licence of an astronaut' by sending his ass "through-tha-cloudz"//
~ Sin's loosin this game, with mic skills like bad wrestlers talkin "to-the-crowds"//
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*1 zeta is the sixth letter in greek alphabet
*2 He've been a champ for around 1 week
*3 I've told him before, he need to work on his multis
*4 When battling Tone, he adapted his style partly, and he admitted that himself
*5 Icarus - Greek mythology, the man who wanted to fly to reach the sun with home made wings, but they melted and he fell and died
*6 Meta is greek and can be translated to: over, above, meta-morphic (metamorphosis) means "transformation"
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You Had A Cool Flow And Fo Real It Was good
8.6
Tha Best Part Is ~My brainstormz cause tidal-waves, submit Maestro a victim to upload and get his vitals-razed, have ya illiterate ass subject tah what my recital-says//
~Obfuscate ya holy being at an obtuse-rate, ya clutched in the grasps of sin, to-lose-is-gay so I made painstaking efforts for you to-lose-this-way//
·SiNiStEr·: Post
~My brainstormz cause tidal-waves, submit Maestro a victim to upload and get his vitals-razed, have ya illiterate ass subject tah what my recital-says//
~Obfuscate ya holy being at an obtuse-rate, ya clutched in the grasps of sin, to-lose-is-gay so I made painstaking efforts for you to-lose-this-way//
~I see hes-in-mah-perception, time fah seizin-a-connection, trap and slice u in bits, Im cleavin-ya-section, niches-is-ya-destination like feces-in-mah-rectum//
~I-aint-seein-how you challenge me, I talked to overseer, my-cleavin's-allowed, U decomposin already, all I wanna hear from you is bye-Im-leavin-now//
~How you gonna bash USA when in Sweden all I gotta do is leech-fah-evidence, advance and beseech-ya-regiments, endin makin attempts to besiege-ya-president//
~All cuz I deciphered ya code via ya speech-impediments, when I was high off speed-amphetamines, just armed with leaves-and-sentiments//
~Im offerin a suggestion-fah-protection, although I feel obligated to deflate Maestro's erection-of-resurrection, itz time fah me to get to dissectin-ya-connection//
~We got our own obese superman, with a spewing fountain-in-lip-tonite, encountering-kryptonite, ya think ya rhymes are phat but in reality they just ammounting-cellulite//
~Visual reached, I found-another-queer, U just lucky I cant 'find it in me' to end-ya-career, but still able to round-up-ya-fear, ass rape you and mend-up-ya-rear//
~I-bo's skillz bein put to tha test but itz on the rocks like drivin on swedish-roads, this swede-iz-old, 50+ battles you'd think a lead-was-known//
~End up in a hospital, I guess I blazed-ya-right, ya pissed off cuz I would grant Tone visitation-rights, Im hearin shouts from the body cast, Sin! Let him in! I gotta see my asian-tonight!//
~Manipulate the internet globally, to 'delete' ya career all I got to do is stroke-a-key, send ya ass back 'home' to tha northeast-g//[1]
~Push ya throne-back-tah-jersey, the 2nd exhibition of Cloud 9 ownage, Tones-attack-irks-me, even then I wont-lack-tha-mercy to laugh and watch you get thrown-back like mah-jersey//
Vote Gos to 4 Maestro
how the fuck you gon say that the 'title is going to my head' cuz im fighting a loss..
how ignorant it is to say somethin like that..
i could give a FUCK LESS if i had the title or not.. just this is bullshit if i gonna lose i wanna lose fair.. i already took the belt out my sig i dont care.
i find it weird that maestro sends up a post sayin he dont like losin or w/e and 2 people come out the shadows..
im not that mad now but a rematch is in store.
how the fuck you gon say that the 'title is going to my head' cuz im fighting a loss..
how ignorant it is to say somethin like that..
i could give a FUCK LESS if i had the title or not.. just this is bullshit if i gonna lose i wanna lose fair.. i already took the belt out my sig i dont care.
i find it weird that maestro sends up a post sayin he dont like losin or w/e and 2 people come out the shadows..
im not that mad now but a rematch is in store.
Im pretty sure its gonna stay up towards tha top anywayz lolso true......lol
wow... alot of drama 8)