West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on October 01, 2003, 03:57:47 AM
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AIIGHT VERSES DUE BY THA 12TH..
20-25 BARS..
MUST BE AT LEAST TWO PERSONALS IN EACH VERSE..
YALL ARE ALL GETTIN A PM WIT A LINK HERE SO NO EXCUSES ABOUT NOT SEEIN THE THREAD...NOW LETS GOOOOOOO........
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Checkin in....
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i just got back from Cairns to find this in my PM box...... ill see what i can do
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is this still on??
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now for the championship in a fuckin THREE-WAY-BATTLE, ill watch these two dicks self destrcuct when they DISPLAY-their-RATTLE/
both dicks hope to be the WCC MIDDLE-WEIGHT-CHAMPS,"hahaha".. my wackest lines will RIDDLE-BERATE-these-TRAMPS/
everyone been sayin the tourney been a NO-SHOW,i'll show em how to FLOW-ALTHOUGH...while you two fuckers can begin yo BLOW
you fuckers shit jus shows signs of WEAR-AND-TEAR, makin no sense itz lyin scattered HERE-AND-THERE, both u bitches already beginning to DESPAIR/
[against teejay]
here's TEEJAY;; the perfect example of lack of word PLAY, watch as DS hack AWAY, at this dick with his spectacular rhyme DISPLAY/
spittin verses like da speeches of MALCOLM X , your rymes aint even half as COMPLEX, to what u're gonna see NEXT/
checked yo page and experienced the results of BEING-BORED*,motherfucker,spit shit like that against me you'll be FLEEING-this-BOARD/
the bitch's got some pics of LAURYN-HILL, you gonna spit shit you hear on her songs fuck..i'll beat you SPARRING-STILL!! /
your rhymes show that you've been 'MIS-EDUCATED',your wackness taken your brain to being in 'BLISS-n-SEDATED' /
this dicks' brain was INSTALLED-with-DOUBT; when i CALLED-HIM-OUT, fuckin pussy..at the end of it he BACKED-OUT!!/
[against siccstyle]
this confused bitch would ave lost TRACK with his multiple name changes, he first called himself FATTAK and later realised it was WACK/
then he called himself RED-ALERT on every THREAD-he-SQUIRT...i was alerted then that this bitch's brain was DEAD-n-INERT/
you should be forgotten at the end of this when you're RIPPED, wcc's greatest sin would be to re-read your SCRIPT/
your sig's got lines by the west's DOPEST-LYRICIST?? ,compared to him your lines wack as fuck,i'll make 'em REST-n-cease-to-EXIST/
i'm ras kass here and i'll do the ra'ASSASINATION',break yo ryme FOUNDATION,keep yo 'soul and rymes on ice' you stupid ABBERATION/
u'll add bitten enhancements to your ryme like silicon on your BREAST, u jus dont POSSESS dat lyrical ZEST,cant witness my UNREST /
these dicks rymes express constipated THINKING, dat bulb on their head jus seems to be BLINKING, while their lines only seem to be SHRINKING/
after this, their ryme career will be SINKING, effects of my rymes far more dangerous than DRINKING/
dont know whats there left to diss these TWO-ON, they'll be fleein the board now they got some lines for them to bite n CHEW-ON/
da outcome of this battle had INCIDENTALLY-TRANSPIRED, da moment i spit my first word and then you fuckers were PERMANENTLY-RETIRED/
and now finally DS sits ATOP-that-THRONE , while TJ and Siccstyle still DROP-their-MOAN, fuck i'm feelin sorry for ya two..i'll give ya my lines on LOAN!!/
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*title of a song/beat he made on his soundclick page
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BRACE YO SELF FOO!!!
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first off...
dead souljah, u couldnt drop a hot rhyme if i set ur notepad on fire/
whoops ur a textcee, make that notepad application.. btw, didnt this fag retire?/
why'd u bother to come back? couldnt rhyme tight if u rapped through a tube/
yeh i declined a battle, why the fuck would i waste raps on this stooge?/
u quick to sacrifice a punchline for the sake of a couple of rhyming words/
u diss like a bird, cheap cheap cheap! got the content but just cant FIND the words/
grab you by the legs, use ur head as a mop.. damn the towel's twice as absorbent/
this guy's a "fuckin joke"... like indians tryin to make freaky porn shit/
i'll leave u awake in a cold sweat, T.J. interrupted DS' wet dream over Neo/
movie fetish bitch.. i'll lacerate your face, "reload" you just to spank u over the knee yo/
sharing is caring.... spread the pain
damn it sucks havin to whoop the ass of a fellow slim-x hater/
fuck it man, like the crocodile hunter's hands, my shit wrecks gators/
sicstyle, u couldnt spit sick if u regurgitated midway through a verse/
fuck mercy, i'll slaughter you, attend your funeral, bullets sprayed through your hearse/
shit, i'll slap you with my dick, leave u pistol whipped... you lovin it yeah?/ (piss tool whipped)
and like huge patches of lettuce in open forests, this cunt's covered in hairs/ (hares)
drag him round by the arm, dont worry it wont hurt much with all that underarm cushioning/
hairy ass lebbo, i bet your knuckles so furry there's no room to push a ring/
quit cryin about school fool, your key to life is your education/
u lost this the same way as midgets in high jump, lack of elevation/
fuck an outro
posted 1 hour 15 mins before deadline
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deadsouljah, u gotta learn whut a multi is, because almost none of yours were.
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T.J.
Teej we homies but goin easy on u is hardly-the-notion/
Sic be killin more aussies then the bali-explosions/1
wonder why ain't got a crew? that the answer u urgin?/
cause everytime we c 1 of ur "free agent" posts surgin/
all we see in u is another crocodile dundee or steve irwin/
D.S:
VDK the present n future no1 comin stronger-then-this/
u livin in the past , reppin a crew that no longer-exists/ 2
in the form of metaphores honesty is z point i'm goin right-too/
u must be really "unique" cause not even ya clones "like-u"/
Both of yall :
shit u better admit it u motherfuckers lost-this/
what would u expect? i got more keys than a locksmith/
so what's real ?battling me MCs dicks turn to vagina/
realise SicStyle is so underground he raps in china/
powerful enough to cush ya face through the granite/
punches strong enough to strik a tunnel through the planet/
i am god , so a rock band interefering is ya only form of "divine intervention"/ (the-vines are a rock group)
smiles under ya neck the VDK version of a lasting-impression/
yo u think i don't have enough bars ot write a verse ? why the fuck u askin-me?/
see fuck deep songs and love storys SicStyle the real"lyrical tragedy"/
n the last post proves it u can only beat me if i no show or a technicality/
20 BARS
1: bali terror attacks a couple years back , most ppl who died were australians
2:MD ,is dead yet deadsouljah keeps the crew's logo in her sig
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GAWDAMN...now we need a mod or kill to come vote on this here...
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not trying to be bitchell, but sic u were under the limit
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"not trying to be bitchell, but sic u were under the limit "
i thought the 20-25 bars limit was a rough guideline . i didn't know it had to followed to the letter.
if u wanna DQ me fine by me
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Actually by the clock i have (top right coner of the screen) i still have 40 minutes left in october 12th , so i'm gonna add 3 more bars at the vey end so if u ppl have a problem with it i can edit em out
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i wasnt trying to get u DQ'd, just lettin ya know so if u had time u could fix it up coz cheap losses suck
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"i wasnt trying to get u DQ'd, just lettin ya know so if u had time u could fix it up coz cheap losses suck"
ok , thanx for the heads up ...
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i wasnt trying to get u DQ'd, just lettin ya know so if u had time u could fix it up coz cheap losses suck
dont you have a few dq's in ya record?
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yes i do, but since this is a middleweight title match a DQ shouldnt have to happen
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hey jus thought id let teejay know that i never did retire... ;D .. i was away for a while but i never did retire ... so there was no 'comeback' from retirement or anything of that sort..
jus thought id mention that...
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reitiring, leaving, same shit different smell.... and u did come back, thats y ur battling here ;)
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so.....................any1 gonna vote ?
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i think were waitin for Kill the official judge to vote, but where the fuck is he??
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yeah ... where is KILL??.. .
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checkin in.......
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Aight then
(max. score 5)
DEADSOULJAH: Not bad, but I've seen better from you. You used the nice vocab you got (which can be useful at times), but sometimes it seemed like you tried to sound complicated and neglected both structural details and punches. Many of your multies (some yes) were not really multies cause they had different numbers of syllables ("MIDDLE-WEIGHT-CHAMPS"...."RIDDLE-BERATE-these-TRAMPS") or certain words you connected didn't rhyme ("CALLED-HIM-OUT"..."BACKED-OUT!!"....not even a rhyme at all cause you rhymed "out" with "out"). The punches weren't bad, some could have been worked on. There weren't many personals but I can't tell how much you got on your opponents. Overall not a bad verse at all, but you can do better IMO....3.4/5
T.J.: Unlike DS you didn't even try to make multies and luckily you ain't one of the cats who compulsively connect words for no reason...the rhyme structure was simple, but as for punches (though you could've spit more personals) your shit was quite dope, had sum original metas. Your vocab was nice too and it was quite easy to flow. You kept it simple (structurally) but it was pretty much an immaculate verse...3.9/5
SICCSTYLE: You just came hardest, simple as that. Your rhyming was the best of all and the same goes for sum of the punches. For somehow the "both of y'all" part was weaker, it was like you used the best punches to start and then came up with the rather average ones. Still your shit flowed nicely and as said had the best rhymes plus the personal shit was pretty hard...I'ma give this to you...4.1/5
WINNER = SICCSTYLE
btw...don't think 3/5 is wack or sumthin, cause if I gave a 5/5 that would be like sum of the dopest shit ever spit on this board, 4/5 is quite dope etc.
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yay finally voted!! ;D
congratulations amin, enjoy your belt
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*hoists belt over his head* I ......AM........DA CHAMPION........
shout out to :Mack, ill natural ,adamx ,boston boy , LP ,Abstruse ,Sinister ,Vitodeluca , Deadsouljah and T.J for coming this weak ;D just playin i barely edged out a victory ....
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Congrats Siccstyle!!! ... keep it up ...
thanks to T.J. and to Kill for votin ...
:)
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VDK REPPIN!!!!!!!!
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That was a nice verse Siccstyle props on that