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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' on July 14, 2008, 01:47:34 AM
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8-12 bars
first to 3 votes wins (unless after one week voting is still not finished then I (as the moderator) pick winner
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The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme' ;D
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The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme' ;D
dope homie
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ummm, I havent battled in years....and didnt sign up for this shit. But for some reason Infnite just tossed my name in the mix...lol
Its the 'second coming' like part two in a sex flick
Like ramps on freeways, we'll see you at the exit
Leavin you anorexic, yah weight is diminishin
Mortal Kombat rap, and my fate is to "FINISH HIM!"
Like im rapin the innocent, this 'little pussy is fucked'
Shoven rabbits feet, take a seat man yah 'pushin yah luck'
Perpetratin, bitch please, little fleas a big phony
Only "M.C" I can see, G, is in yah sig homie
Dont ask, dont tell, so gay guys salute
In the closet all yah life, now thats the real "Quiet Truth"
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The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme' ;D
you just ignorin that whole 8-12 bars thing huh? lol
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god damn i cant even vote both y'all KILLED IT :o
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The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme' ;D
you just ignorin that whole 8-12 bars thing huh? lol
Nah, he said 8-12 bars, not 8-12 lines. ;)
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Not quite sure if I'm allowed to vote or what, but whatever he's some centz...
QT
Lots of nice and original concepts, but the delivery is off... not to mention you did call yourself a "herb", i got the word play, but ain't that still a bad thing to be...fuck it? I dunno. Any way, it's still a solid verse a few tweaks and it'd be a killer verse. Keep spittin and elevatin. I was feelin the "hertz" line just you could reworded it to impact harder im sure.
Jook
You used classic and effective style of keystyle battling, setup-punch, and you had some dope punches, good personals, overall a dope verse.
Vote = Jook
Reason = He just hit harder, the punches were a lot stronger.
Keep elevatin... Good battle
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Propz for votin'.
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both very solid drops,imma go QT on this one although it was a tough choice,his shit just stood out to me more
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1-1 thus far
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The reason I shoot fire and spit heat is becuz I'm always aiming
Winning battles like it's nuffin, becuz I'm 'always reigning'
See keystyles is predictable, but with these kinds I murk
I leave niggas in pain, cuz like the car rental, it 'hertz'
When you talk or post, nobody pays u attention, you broke
You better being the 'bicycle wheel', cuz nobodys cares if ya 'spoke'
See ur rap style dont got enuff meat to it, like a lame diet
Plus, my style is too big for you, just like Lane Bryant
My rhymes is so amazing and that's a known fact
I can steal lyrics make em sound good, and take ur name at that
You wasn't made for rap, you wack, I heard that thru the vines
You ain't worth it wit me, I'm like a telephone pole, cuz I was built for lines
See I don't even feel like doin' this, man I don't know who u is
But my name is on this battle, and I feel I gots ta win
Now that my board self just sat here and took a minute to kick a rhyme
Being the herb I am, I feel like this wasn't worth my 'Thyme' ;D
-weak opening and didn't make sense.. -3
-nice metaphor with the Hertz thing +1.5
-nother nice metaphor with "pke, but line preceding it was wack + 0
-Great metaphor with the telephone poll "lines" +3
-Clever finish, solid use of metaphor +3
Score= 4.5
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^so who u vote for infinite?
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^so who u vote for infinite?
I was going to review them both individually then submit my vote.
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^so who u vote for infinite?
I was going to review them both individually then submit my vote.
ahh, alright
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Its the 'second coming' like part two in a sex flick
Like ramps on freeways, we'll see you at the exit
Leavin you anorexic, yah weight is diminishin
Mortal Kombat rap, and my fate is to "FINISH HIM!"
Like im rapin the innocent, this 'little pussy is fucked'
Shoven rabbits feet, take a seat man yah 'pushin yah luck'
Perpetratin, bitch please, little fleas a big phony
Only "M.C" I can see, G, is in yah sig homie
Dont ask, dont tell, so gay guys salute
In the closet all yah life, now thats the real "Quiet Truth"
Woah! That was sick, homie. You came with the same style as Quiet Truth did, but your metaphors were on a proffesional level, made me suspicious of wether you were bitin... but your best rhyme of all was the one you closed with where you questioned his sexual orientation as the "Quiet Truth"... I'm gonna nominate that in the "Awards" thread for one of the best punches/one liners of the year.
Other highlights were your mortal kombat metaphor and tellin him "the only M.C. I see is in your sig, homie... lol... that was great.
score= 10 points
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Quiet Truth I'm automatically addin 2 points to your score because you had the disadvantage of spittin first, and he could've responded to your verse but didn't, so I am going to subtract two points from Jookin's score.
Quiet Truth I was really impressed with your metaphors, they have improved a lot. maybe had some more style or multi's (multi-rhymes, multi-syllables) and you might have won, but competing tit for tat with Jookin on metaphors you are going to lose cause this dude was droppin metaphors on a proffesional level.
Quiet Truth- 6 points
Jookin- 8 points
my vote= Jookin
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Daaaamnn Jookin gets my vote with the Mariah Carey and final punch line LOL
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It's official... 3-1 - Jookin Wins!
Tournament Record
Jookin- 1-0
Quiet Truth- 0-1
...on to Round 2 (but there is still hope for Quiet Truth, this may be a double elimination tournament, depending on how Round 1 plays out)
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Oh shit, I didn't get that M.C line I thought he was talkin' Papoose, LOL, good shit, propz to ya'll for voting.
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Oh shit, I didn't get that M.C line I thought he was talkin' Papoose, LOL, good shit
LOL damn me 2, i thought pap, i just got it :laugh: dope shit!
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Its the 'second coming' like part two in a sex flick
Like ramps on freeways, we'll see you at the exit
Leavin you anorexic, yah weight is diminishin
Mortal Kombat rap, and my fate is to "FINISH HIM!"
Like im rapin the innocent, this 'little pussy is fucked'
Shoven rabbits feet, take a seat man yah 'pushin yah luck'
Perpetratin, bitch please, little fleas a big phony
Only "M.C" I can see, G, is in yah sig homie
Dont ask, dont tell, so gay guys salute
In the closet all yah life, now thats the real "Quiet Truth"
Woah! That was sick, homie. You came with the same style as Quiet Truth did, but your metaphors were on a proffesional level, made me suspicious of wether you were bitin... but your best rhyme of all was the one you closed with where you questioned his sexual orientation as the "Quiet Truth"... I'm gonna nominate that in the "Awards" thread for one of the best punches/one liners of the year.
Other highlights were your mortal kombat metaphor and tellin him "the only M.C. I see is in your sig, homie... lol... that was great.
score= 10 points
Thanks for the feedback man. But biting? lol You know who this is right? Shit, this aint Maxi lol
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Oh shit, I didn't get that M.C line I thought he was talkin' Papoose, LOL, good shit, propz to ya'll for voting.
good battle man. good shit. peace
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DISQUALIFICATION!... hold up ya'll.... Jookin has been disqualified... it wasn't his fault entirely, I preselected him for the tournament and didn't realize he was postin under a new name, but Jookin is a big time heavywieght O.G. from back in 01' 02' here at keystyle, the OG's might remember him as Tone.
He PM'd me today and let me know who he was.
Tone/Jookin you can still count this as a win in your stats and QT you are gonna have to count this as a loss in your stats...
But Jookin has been disqualified so that means QUIET TRUTH moves on to ROUND 2!
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DISQUALIFICATION!... hold up ya'll.... Jookin has been disqualified... it wasn't his fault entirely, I preselected him for the tournament and didn't realize he was postin under a new name, but Jookin is a big time heavywieght O.G. from back in 01' 02' here at keystyle, the OG's might remember him as Tone.
He PM'd me today and let me know who he was.
Tone/Jookin you can still count this as a win in your stats and QT you are gonna have to count this as a loss in your stats...
But Jookin has been disqualified so that means QUIET TRUTH moves on to ROUND 2!
Good call man. QT, do yah thing homie!
On a side note. I was a mod in this forum years back...towards the second half of the "Golden Era" of keystyle on here. I left for a while, came back...and keystyle was damn near dead. So props to Infinite for trying to get this shit crackin again. This used to be the best spot on the board. Im sure it can be again.
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DISQUALIFICATION!... hold up ya'll.... Jookin has been disqualified... it wasn't his fault entirely, I preselected him for the tournament and didn't realize he was postin under a new name, but Jookin is a big time heavywieght O.G. from back in 01' 02' here at keystyle, the OG's might remember him as Tone.
He PM'd me today and let me know who he was.
Tone/Jookin you can still count this as a win in your stats and QT you are gonna have to count this as a loss in your stats...
But Jookin has been disqualified so that means QUIET TRUTH moves on to ROUND 2!
Good call man. QT, do yah thing homie!
On a side note. I was a mod in this forum years back...towards the second half of the "Golden Era" of keystyle on here. I left for a while, came back...and keystyle was damn near dead. So props to Infinite for trying to get this shit crackin again. This used to be the best spot on the board. Im sure it can be again.
Great to have you back homie, I hope you take an active role here at the forum like before. Review and vote on some of the battles for the tournament if you have time.
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Holee shit, lol, good battle regardless def., so this is where we start our records? That's good shit.
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Holee shit, lol, good battle regardless def., so this is where we start our records? That's good shit.
No... just keep your total record. And you can post it in the "Race to the Top 10 MC's" thread. Just post your win-loss record and who you won and lost against.
You get 1 point awarded to you even when you lose, and you get bonus points if you have a tournament victory.
But don't worry about the point system, leave that up to me, just try to remember your win-loss record.