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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: IslamInevitable on October 09, 2009, 01:06:58 AM

Title: is it hard
Post by: IslamInevitable on October 09, 2009, 01:06:58 AM

is it hard visualize wit ya virtual eyes the virtue in guise when i terrorize
fear in ya eyes is obvious its time to die/
but ya hesistently resistant to enterin ya next existence/
here's another reminder in case you missed it/
nuclear war is imminently depicted to be the end of your progeny/
goliath committin sodomy/ no truth and honesty/
this is food for ya thought b honestly/
its a travesty, wonderin where the seeds of malcolm bee/
my man shabbazz, died no suprise, brothers its time to uprise/
upsize the revolution, but the slogan got customized enough times/
throw dust over ya eyes/
lift ya veil and observe this vicious tale from your citadel/
as i set sail accross the cosmic ocean/
stars movin in and outta focus, comets causin commotion/
my retina gets a glimpse of a nebula, helium, hydrogen and formation of sulfur/
magnanimous images of astonishin times/
while we live in squalor and crime and claim a marvelous mind, its hard to define/
so i write a rhyme to right the wrong/
so feel that which i shed light upon!

bang... till ya catch it in the head

nigga im in a somalian pirate bay gettin high every day!
one luv to my brothers... feelin this one...

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: G-Funk on October 09, 2009, 01:24:57 AM

Quote

^{nuclear war is imminently depicted to be the end of your progeny/
goliath committin sodomy/ no truth and honesty/
this is food for ya thought b honestly/
its a travesty, wonderin where the seeds of malcolm bee/}

this one was definitely better! ^ these lines are my personal favorite. Good flow there.

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: IslamInevitable on October 09, 2009, 01:47:50 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MA4lPJdeAiw

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: QuietTruth on October 09, 2009, 03:52:53 PM

Crazy ill. Propz man. You really doin' somethang man!

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: IslamInevitable on October 09, 2009, 04:22:55 PM

good lookin... appreciate it... gotta lotta work to do on the flow though as always...

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: QuietTruth on October 09, 2009, 04:24:18 PM

Yeah, regardless though, you got writing skills.

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: Þŕiņçë on October 09, 2009, 05:23:12 PM

best practice is prolly rapping along with whatever u listen to. also when your writing to a beat rap it out loud to make sure you got enuff breath an shit to do it. my main problem back in the day was i would always write my raps so fuckin fast that i couldnt even spit em

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: Herbal_Life on October 10, 2009, 02:27:11 AM

DAMN... I JUST GOT HIGH AND READ YOUR SHIT...
NOW I FUCKIN FEEL HIGHER...
SOME SICK FUCKIN SPIT

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: AGeesta on October 10, 2009, 02:28:52 AM

Quote from: LIGHTS on October 10, 2009, 02:27:11 AM

DAMN... I JUST GOT HIGH AND READ YOUR SHIT...
NOW I FUCKIN FEEL HIGHER...
SOME SICK FUCKIN SPIT

yeah some sick fucking spit

like when you come in a whores mouth then make out with her type of sick....

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: TraceOneInfinite Flat Earther 96' on October 11, 2009, 08:59:26 PM

that revolutionary flow... dope spit  my nicca, u larger dan dat nicca steven segal

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: Herbal_Life on October 12, 2009, 08:30:19 AM

 8) 8) 8) 8)

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: IslamInevitable on October 13, 2009, 12:46:59 PM

good lookin ya...

i changed the flow up, i wasnt feelin the last one..
hope this one is better

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-72SqCQ3I0

Title: Re: is it hard
Post by: Herbal_Life on October 13, 2009, 02:52:49 PM

Quote from: IslamInevitable on October 13, 2009, 12:46:59 PM

good lookin ya...

i changed the flow up, i wasnt feelin the last one..
hope this one is better

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-72SqCQ3I0

better