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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: -1 on February 22, 2001, 07:38:03 PM

Title: Rate this tight shit....real tight..
Post by: -1 on February 22, 2001, 07:38:03 PM
yo yo
these lyrical metaphorical metaphors is what you came for/
to explore the chore and scorn the vocal chord/
gettin all distord/
and distorded/
unsorted damn its only 4 in the mornin/
and my eyes are blurred from too much motion/
causin commotion/
yo kid what ya smokin/
cause it seems like it got you all fucked up/
fucked up like a tyson upcut what what/
cause im tearin shit up/
so dont front/
like the rain approinching the sun/
yeha bitch/
i'll quicly cover you up like the moon and a lunar eclipse/
its that easy to fix/
and dimish/
this rhymes kinda short but yo i gotta finish



Last modification: So much style - 02/23/01 at 01:38:03
Title: Re: Rate this tight shit....real tight..
Post by: -1 on February 25, 2001, 07:13:44 AM
rate it biotch!
Title: Re: Rate this tight shit....real tight..
Post by: InSiGhT on February 26, 2001, 04:52:42 AM
it was average but aight.
simple wordplay.
5/10

Last modification: InSiGhT - 02/26/01 at 10:52:42