West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: ITW [the irish boy] on April 17, 2002, 07:12:24 AM
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To all tha scruffy fuckas
resmbling scooby dooby doo
when i rhyme i see you blushes
like some ruby newbie fool
Coz i be creeping on a resurection
coming up atcha like my heads erection
breaking ur body up
like u been hit at the intersection
infecting you with some poetic retoric
im clearing out the shit like sum lyrical septic
accept it
youve been arrested by the dialect of this slayer
you heardme before FUCK YALL
if youre considered a HATA
I been sleeping on this forum
by my decorum just call me sleeping beuaty
with the thugged mentality
to horrify any misty eyed newbie
Peep and rate outta ten, fair ratings only.
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ITW
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I Aint Going To Lie, I Wasnt Feeling This Too Much. It Had A Nice Flow, But Other Aspects Of Your Scheme Lacked Slightly. Dont Let That Stop You From Posting More, Because I Know You Got Better Rhymes Inside You. ;D