It's May 04, 2024, 09:07:52 AM
I'll knock you out and when you awaken, your manhood is taken,
Kalipzo researched ur humerous-rhymes, doin repetitive 'wordplay' numerous-times, U don't "Hip'n Hop" lines/ yo dont take it in a bad way Kalipzo
Lost your whole verse was dope, flowed well and was cool to read.Reefa yours started really well but when you got to lesson 2 the lines started becoming to big for the rhyme, therefore when I was rappin it out in my head it didnt flow all to well.Never the less a good piece you 2.