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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bez on June 11, 2003, 04:11:37 AM
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Yo homie,
15-20 bars
Deadline saturday (n e time)
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I'm equipped for a battle, good vs evil, I'm the desitful white boy quick to put a hole in some people,
You are included in my selection, you've been targetted for termination, you ain't no John Conner but your certainly messin wit a Swazenegger,
I've been sent to murder, decapitation's a hobby, I ain't hear to scare ya I'm removin your head from your body,
Nobody's droppin this heat, niggaz just can't compete, I can't be beat, so therefore you could call me the Elite,
My time is present so I'm destroyin fools wit calibre, if it ain't smith and weston I'm goin old school to excalibre,
But I ain't no knight but I am a dark horse, Bringing choas to daylight, burying bodies on the morse,
I ain't mean to sound shady but I'm a modern day Ian Brady, goin crazy, starvin myself like an African baby,
We all die someday, that I know, but in what situation, if I could have it my way vito you perish first without no hesitation or information,
What happened, where he be, where did Vito go, I'd be like Yo the hoe proberly couldent find his flow, fool proberly left the planet on a proper down low,
I'd be laughin, still rappin, will your ass is cookin crisp, I'm a point, aim, shoot, understand I never miss, bitch,
I'm a phenonenom like Travolta, watch me dirty dance on your ass, quick to brake your arrow, tear your face off like a mask,
I'm the only one fit enough for task in hand, this shit wasn't planned but I'm a make it my land,
Cos you may be the Vito but fool I'm the boss, I'm the don, I'm the number 1 like Jesus on the cross,
And I will resurrect, always here so you never forget that you can't fuck with Bez, I'm here to represent,
My shits scientific, I write as deep as the Pacific oceon and your shit makin me do the fuckin locomotion,
I ain't boastin but my shits better, I'm a heavy weight cracker you as light as a feather,
I'm scandalous a thief you a tired out chief, you just can't compete cos my rhymes are straight heat,
So do me a favour Vito whatever your fuckin name is, stay outter my business and take your finger out your anus and smell it, smell bad,
Its the smell of defeat, you've wounded like a bitch, I'm a watch you bleed,
I'll be back, motherfucker
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young virgin kid won't make to the end of this horror flick, never had a chick, sex-less,
maybe that's why you bragged you "never miss", little homie now listen: (1)
you ain't my friend like what's been said by Biz-Markie, just an opponent, Bez-marks-the next target-for-me to start talkin' shit,(2)
like raisin' a future crip you gotta "wait-n'-C" how I'll murder you lyrically,don't warm-up-on-me, should take it more-seriously,
I'll effect board whores-terminally, read you "last-rights" like a right arm-amputee, and make you wish ya mom's strangled-ya-ambilically, (3)
mah elite verses slaughter guys, shoulda crossed you're eyes and dotted your t's,
but ya only skill is leavin' voters with crossed eyes and ya can't compete verbally,
knock ya from a Don ta-a-little-G, like bein' banned from florida ya shoulda stayed out-tha-keys,
you're about-to-see only dudes rulin' down here are Jebidiah, George Junior and me, this is Vito's Republican guard in effect G!
there's no-business-like when I show-Bez-which senses-I'm-arresting, I'm sensing a need for violence-dispensin', (4)
"paging smith-and-wesson, white-courtesy-phone, go a night-to-Bezzy's-home, got teach this bitch brit-a-lesson", (5)
I spit curses on long verses, my multi's come in synchopated bursts, when it comes to your flow or your metas I can't distinguish which is worse,
shoulda researched before you spit first, put you in a pine box twice so you shit sounds "re-hearsed", like Snoop in reverse, leave ya runnin' from the palace to the Chuurch, (6)
7000 post veteran with no crew, what's it tell you? Hate to be the bearer a bad news but nobody's feeling you,
motherfucker, maybe you need to try somethin' new and quit gettin all you're metas from blockbuster, Magic eight balls says? True (7)
you a mothafuckin' don so it shoulda donned on ya mothafucka to not fuck with this young buck but it's too late, vito deluca stuck ya!!
1- He once talked about not having sex yet, one of the rules in horror films is the virgin doesn't die, in his verse he said he never misses
2- Biz Markie is the rapper who sang that song "Just a friend" about a chick who was cheating on him with a dude she claimed was her friend but wasn't
3- He said this was a warm up for the tournament in his call out, called him a board whore just cause he's got so many posts
4- No business like show business, get it?
5- Smith and Wesson make guns
6- Newest Snoop Dogg album has a song called "from the chuurch to the palace"
7- For those that don't know, a magic eight ball is this thing that has different answers to questions you ask it. He makes a lot of movie references, blockbuster is a movie rental place
PEACE!
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Vito get's this, better punches and a harder verse. I'm not one for footnotes though, but most of it was understandable without reading the foot notes. The only time i did refer to the footnotes is on the first personal so I can't really take much away from you for that. I'm liking your shit homes.. Keep doing your thang.
Vote- Vito
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Btw, Bez has an ill verse too.. Not too many punches though
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Thanks Black Pack, I took y'alls advice from my battle with Ill Natural and tried to come with harder punches this time, thanks for the vote
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nice verse dawg
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Thanks homie, you too mehn, little preview for peeps of the upcomin' tourney..
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Vito cmon dawg it seems like you're using footnotes for the sake of using 'em
No business like show business, get it?
Smith and Wesson make guns
Newest Snoop Dogg album has a song called "from the chuurch to the palace"
7- For those that don't know, a magic eight ball is this thing that has different answers to questions you ask it. He makes a lot of movie references, blockbuster is a movie rental place
5 dollars for everyone who didn't understand these parts of the verse... snoops album. damn lol.
but dope man, nice flow and alla that. i give it to vito cause of a better all round verse... simple as that
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Yeah, I know, but then I start thinkin' some people are on this board from Belgium, UK, ect. and I don't know if they have blockbuster movie rentals, smith and wessons, magic eight balls, ect. there ya know? It's not as if you HAVE to read the footnotes, but I just have em there in case.
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lol i'm just messing with ya... As long as I understand your verse it's all good.
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Yes i vote vitodeluca too. doper verse, was more to the point with the disses
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Yo Bez, what are we doin' with the votes on this? Straight to 5, 3-0 is KO, what up? Let me know, I'm cool either way.
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all the votes are gunna be the same.
Congrats Vito, good verse man, I feel all the replies where they say about the disses but the thing is I had shit to diss you with, thats where I fell off. What do all ya'll think tho considering it was like my 2nd ever battle rhyme?
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Really? 2nd Battle? That's real good man, I didn't know that. Naw, I liked your shit, for sure. I'd be glad to give ya battle advice if ya want, but I'm not sure that's what you were askin'. Anyways, thanks for the battle, I like your keystyles that I've read (preparing to battle you, hahaha).
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Damn, i've never really checked this board out before but those were two dope verses. Vito came tighter though cause his punchlines were better, and you could see that Bez didn't really have anything on him. Maybe if Bez had gone second then he would have had more material. Lol at the footnotes, some shit is always going to go over people's heads but I don't think that's really a problem and the notes did seem a little needless.
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Daz-thanks for the inputs, it's always welcome here when sometimes it's hard to get peeps in here to check the battles, and even harder to get em to vote. Keep checkin' it homie, there's some dope guys here, lots of creativity.
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Yer thanks for droppin thought and votes everyone much appreciated. Vito I will battle ya again soon make no doubt, ya never know, might even meet in the tourney.
Thanks ya'll
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quit sayin ni**a whitey.. im white myself but that just aint my place to say
and yo.. im thinkin that verse was bit.. no offense but ya only personals were weak and it was a basic 'fill in the blank' verse except for the end, where is was bez style.. weak.
you've dropped about 30 keystyles and i havent seen anything with that much creativity. and vito been in 10+ battles.. plenty of stuff to find personals on and you were quick to defend the fact that you 'had nothin about him'.
bez if ya did just say now.. or im gonna do some research..
and would ya call yourself 'the elite' even though it is a major kru here on dubcc.. gimme some kinda explanation.
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quit sayin ni**a whitey.. im white myself but that just aint my place to say
and yo.. im thinkin that verse was bit.. no offense but ya only personals were weak and it was a basic 'fill in the blank' verse except for the end, where is was bez style.. weak.
you've dropped about 30 keystyles and i havent seen anything with that much creativity. and vito been in 10+ battles.. plenty of stuff to find personals on and you were quick to defend the fact that you 'had nothin about him'.
bez if ya did just say now.. or im gonna do some research..
and would ya call yourself 'the elite' even though it is a major kru here on dubcc.. gimme some kinda explanation.
You disloyal motherfucker (10 points for anyone that can name the film) lol
Look sinister, I asked for somebody to battle on the keystyle board cos I figured I cud do with a battle or 2 for practice before the tourney.
Vito accepted so I battled him. My verse wasn't exactly hard hitting but I wasn't really planning it that way n e ways, I just wnated to drop a cool verse that could show the board waht I could do if I put my mind to it and shit.
You have read 30 songs of mine kiddah but u have never read 30 keystyles. I have only ever battled like once or twice.
I called myself the Elite as a simple little diss. Nothing wrong with that mate. And btw I will say nigga in a rhyme if I want, I am white so what, but its not exactly like I am battling somebody face to face, if I was of course I wouldent use the word nigga, but considering I am battling over the Internet I will use n e word I wanna use. Unless somebody clearly stats to me that it is a rule that I cant say nigga I will keep using it to my hearts content.
You know what man I am a little pissed off that you actually have come in my thread and acused me of stealing somebody elses shit. I have never done that before, I would never do that and the thought has never crossed my mind. You have got the cheek to come in here and say it was bit before even saying yo bez that was a good verse dawg or somit like that.
It wasn't bit I wrote it, all my own work, I lost the battle with it, thanks for wondering. You wanna do some research do it, I will help!!!
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Daymm, Vito be servin mufuckaz....
Sinister....Just shut yur trap up and let it be....
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my trap was shut the whole time..
it was typing.
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Well break yur fingers and bang yur head against tha wall....
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Well break yur fingers and bang yur head against tha wall....
that'll do