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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: da_notorious_mack on March 18, 2003, 11:41:37 AM

Title: Explosive
Post by: da_notorious_mack on March 18, 2003, 11:41:37 AM

Posing-minds fake-greatness,while Mack known to drop-explosive-lines
got-em-notin-mine,it takes-great-wit then u might become a pro-in-time,
tryin ta walk-in-my-shoes,but cant get ya toes-in-mine,tryed talking-my-views
but didnt know-the-rhymes,you hoes-behind,plus i bring the most akward-news
stalking-krus,castratin-cliques,been around-too-long why ya ass-hating-bitch?
demonstrating-shit,if you think i hate ya sound-ya-wrong,call me a hata,im not takin-it
im still loud-an-strong,allowed-to-prolong,talkin bout that hall of shame,IM PROUD-TO-BE-ON

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: M Dogg™ on March 18, 2003, 12:36:01 PM

nice piece... the end had me though... lmao.

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: |JEM|ILL| on March 18, 2003, 12:58:10 PM

acually this was a nice flow i liked how it flowed...nice rhyme scheme...you just need a much better concept thaz all...good...

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: MasterOfCeremonies on March 18, 2003, 02:12:48 PM

sick shit mack... scheme was off the chain, multis flowed hella smoothly too... keep it up

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: Entreri117 on March 18, 2003, 02:54:58 PM

Real nice son...keep it up Mack

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: Inspectah on March 18, 2003, 03:09:18 PM

Tight piece dawg! Keep it up, i love ya lil keys, they jam packed wiv flow! lol

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Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: @Ss@sSiN on March 19, 2003, 06:17:21 AM

Quote from: In[spek]ta on March 18, 2003, 03:09:18 PM

i love ya lil keys

lol

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: gyrl1da on March 19, 2003, 11:29:57 AM

my rating 3.5 / 5 *'s... that's defintely above average 'cuz i do b givin' nig'z 1*..lol nah but that was tight tho... keep up the good work! ;)

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: Disceptive AssAssin on March 21, 2003, 06:17:18 AM

tight shit...

Title: Re:Explosive
Post by: TiNmaN on March 21, 2003, 06:37:46 PM

Quote from: MasterOfCeremonies on March 18, 2003, 02:12:48 PM

sick shit mack... scheme was off the chain, multis flowed hella smoothly too... keep it up