West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bez on August 06, 2005, 05:10:57 PM
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I'm a legend like John, not Elton or Wycleff,
Tryin to write a deep song but fuck it I'm too vexed,
Not high off weed but floating off sucess,
Coping wit the mental stress of being crowned the best,
Lyrically blessed wit precision to kill other MC's,
Literally untested so my decision is to be ill to enemys,
Make em sick to their stomach, so much they can't vomit,
Cos with every carrot they puke the more carrots in my pocket,
More money in my wallet, more riches in my vault,
So when its time to march I got enough to revolt,
An rebel against this hell that I find myself stuck in,
With only a pad and a pen for company and lovin,
Just coping with strugglin, tryin to make my money,
Just to put food in my stomach cos I feel so hungry,
My tummy always rumbles like its begging for food,
But then I see starving kids all dying on the news,
An its crude and its cruel an I cant help but cry,
Cos if I cant fucking save em Lords knows I'll still try,
Wit blood drippin from my eyes I'll clear this mess,
Cos I'm the bez, I'm blessed, I'm the bez the best!
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good freestyle type...last lines were kewl.
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yeh nice poem bez :laugh:
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Just to put food in my stomach cos I feel so hungry,
My tummy always rumbles like its begging for food,
But then I see starving kids all dying on the news,
An its crude and its cruel an I cant help but cry,
Cos if I cant fucking save em Lords knows I'll still try,
Wit blood drippin from my eyes I'll clear this mess,
Cos I'm the bez, I'm blessed, I'm the bez the best!
that bit is dope as fuck, props.
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dope!
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Umm I used that john legend piece before but we said it differently. I know it's not a bite of mine. But anyway nice flow though. The ending got deeper with the talk about crisis and shit. 1
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that was weak
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^STFU
I thought it was dope Bez
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^STFU
I thought it was dope Bez
Hey with yo lil initialz and arrows you can stick that shit in yo ass on the real. I ain't got time for smart ass kids. Portrayin they best to be hard on the net. So keep ya fuckin comments like that to yaself bitch. Besides I was just givin Bez propz. Obviously you didn't read my shit right. Illiterate muthafucka. That's the 1st warning......
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that was sick
nice job
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^STFU
I thought it was dope Bez
Hey with yo lil initialz and arrows you can stick that shit in yo ass on the real. I ain't got time for smart ass kids. Portrayin they best to be hard on the net. So keep ya fuckin comments like that to yaself bitch. Besides I was just givin Bez propz. Obviously you didn't read my shit right. Illiterate muthafucka. That's the 1st warning......
LOL! He wasnt even talking about you. Try reading other peoples posts before you post some dumbass shit.
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LOL! Aight thanks for lettin be know LOL! I feel like a pure asshole now. So apologies out to homie. You see why though I said it because it was right under my post with the arrow like abouve his. But yeah my bad I'm hella lookin like a newbie on here know fasho....Lol! Good job on the drop though.
Uppin!
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not bad