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DUBCC - Tha Connection => West Coast Classics => Topic started by: Shawn Nutt on August 18, 2006, 09:13:01 PM
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This is the latest version of my song, "Ice-Cold Whalley Kid". Before, I recorded this on my computer with no adlibs or doubling, and no emotion, for that
matter. Now, I have all 3. This is much, much closer to the final mixdown of the track, but most likely not the final cut. Props to anyone who drops
feedback, it is highly appreciated. If you like it, pass it around!
www.soundclick.com/shawnnutt (http://www.soundclick.com/shawnnutt)
http://rapidshare.de/files/29937778/Shawn_Nutt_-_Ice-Cold_Whalley_Kid__Uncensored_.mp3.html (http://rapidshare.de/files/29937778/Shawn_Nutt_-_Ice-Cold_Whalley_Kid__Uncensored_.mp3.html)
- Shawn Nutt; Surrey, British Columbia
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This is the latest version of my song, "Ice-Cold Whalley Kid". Before, I recorded this on my computer with no adlibs or doubling, and no emotion, for that
matter. Now, I have all 3. This is much, much closer to the final mixdown of the track, but most likely not the final cut. Props to anyone who drops
feedback, it is highly appreciated. If you like it, pass it around!
www.soundclick.com/shawnnutt (http://www.soundclick.com/shawnnutt)
http://rapidshare.de/files/29937778/Shawn_Nutt_-_Ice-Cold_Whalley_Kid__Uncensored_.mp3.html (http://rapidshare.de/files/29937778/Shawn_Nutt_-_Ice-Cold_Whalley_Kid__Uncensored_.mp3.html)
- Shawn Nutt; Surrey, British Columbia
youre rappin?
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You're not even from the west, this belongs in "The Lab"....I'll check it out now though.
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It's not bad man...Thought it would be worse. The only problem I have with it is it sounds too commercially influenced, at least if you wanna make music online make sure it's got more originality to it so that people will wanna check for you... This sounds like an amature made version of a radio song...The flow's there, sure it needs improvement, but it's there...Lyrics, I can't really judge that, it's your feelings on the track (hopefully)... not shit that I can really relate to or feel, but I've read your keystyles, they're not bad and if you keep at it you'll only keep improving...The work will pay off, just don't give up like I did, cuz then you'll never go back, you'll always want to, but you never will. Believe in yourself and practice, you can be an ill rapper...PeACe
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It's not bad man...Thought it would be worse. The only problem I have with it is it sounds too commercially influenced, at least if you wanna make music online make sure it's got more originality to it so that people will wanna check for you... This sounds like an amature made version of a radio song...The flow's there, sure it needs improvement, but it's there...Lyrics, I can't really judge that, it's your feelings on the track (hopefully)... not shit that I can really relate to or feel, but I've read your keystyles, they're not bad and if you keep at it you'll only keep improving...The work will pay off, just don't give up like I did, cuz then you'll never go back, you'll always want to, but you never will. Believe in yourself and practice, you can be an ill rapper...PeACe
heh thanks alot :D yeah this was my first song, just re-recorded in better quality... ive been rappin about 4 months now, maybe 5... the people at my school love it, probably because nobody there listens to real music, but its still a good way to get a buzz when u dont have any bad feedback
but yeah the lyrics is all me... im not a "gangster", or even a "studio gangster", i am what i am and thats what i rap about... so the lyrics are, for the better part of the song, the definition of me, which is what the "concept" of the song is
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LOL, you need to put some more emotion in your voice
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LOL, you need to put some more emotion in your voice
u should hear the original, lol... and that is emotion, my voice is fucked up
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It's straight...sounds just like that bouncy south beat....Lol about the emotion
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OMgz i heard dis before, was in teh other thread, was like boom UPSIDE MY FUCCIN HEAD! I likez yo voice, sound like a black man with a LADY!
NEwayzzz, ima do a remix or sumn, holla back
14/10!!!! 4 SHO!