West Coast Connection Forum

Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Mr. O on September 01, 2006, 01:05:13 PM

Title: 2 new tracks updated
Post by: Mr. O on September 01, 2006, 01:05:13 PM

"it's systematic" (rock/experiemental)

and

"Givin' it up" (rap) (loop only.)

http://www.myspace.com/jrtiktrytitid

thank u

Title: Re: 2 new tracks updated
Post by: Mr. O on September 01, 2006, 05:13:01 PM

up

Title: Re: 2 new tracks updated
Post by: Timmeeeehh on September 02, 2006, 01:28:16 AM

givin it up - tight drums, tight shit. can't really give any criticism. might need a bit more variation, that's it.

systematic - sounds which are used are quite ugly in my opinion; snare, organ, etc. doesn't feel very rocky at all. i would replace the snare for a hip-hop snare and make a bit freaky shit of it, no organ, just more synths.

Title: Re: 2 new tracks updated
Post by: Mr. O on September 02, 2006, 01:39:46 AM

Quote from: John "Prima" Doe on September 02, 2006, 01:28:16 AM

givin it up - tight drums, tight shit. can't really give any criticism. might need a bit more variation, that's it.

systematic - sounds which are used are quite ugly in my opinion; snare, organ, etc. doesn't feel very rocky at all. i would replace the snare for a hip-hop snare and make a bit freaky shit of it, no organ, just more synths.

thx for comment..but for systamic song..is not rap..it's experiemental...so yeah...

Title: Re: 2 new tracks updated
Post by: Oklin on September 03, 2006, 01:00:36 AM

they are both allright.. i guess you need to work some more on both... at Systematic i don't like the snare.. wayyy too much room on it..

Title: Re: 2 new tracks updated
Post by: Mr. O on September 05, 2006, 11:02:46 AM

http://www.myspace.com/jrtiktrytitid 

okay, i reworked those two songs...check em out..thx