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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dynamic on November 13, 2006, 11:46:04 AM
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Gotta Give It - Dedicated to Carmen
*hook* x2
Girl you know that i am lovin you
All the little things that you do
you know i gotta give it to you
and you know that this is true
saw you from across the way, so cautiously
i stalked my prey, all day and then walked up to say
i dig your style right down to the way that your hair sways
maybe later today, we can hang and do some thangs
throw my arm around ya, fuck all those dogs that hound ya
have swearing you found love, from the moment i found ya
think we won't be makin it? then scrape this relationship
you don't want to leave, so girl you need to start facing it
*hook* x2
Girl you know that i am lovin you
All the little things that you do
you know i gotta give it to you
and you know that this is true
you know i've always loved your style
i just melt inside everytime you smile
i just want to be with you day and night
you ain't the shady type, you lady like and that's what your baby likes
spit amazing on mics that's why i'm rated nice
so maybe on a day that's right
couldn't leave you if i wanted to
your everything i've wanted too
i hope you feel the same way
cause while i'm with you i'll always say
*hook* x4
Girl you know that i am lovin you
All the little things that you do
you know i gotta give it to you
and you know that this is true
DYNAMIC
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I never write shit like this, need some feedback before I give it to her.
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another good read
it feels like u changed ur rhyme technique on this one; did u or did it just come out like that?
(that's not a negative comment btw)
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yea I tried to switch it up a bit for this one
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Haha. That hook is on some Ja Rule type shit. So its a hit. Nice drop.
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Haha. That hook is on some Ja Rule type shit. So its a hit. Nice drop.
:laugh:
yea...but nice one none the less dogg. 8)
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yes let us know what sher thinks.............prop1+