West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Dynamic on November 13, 2006, 11:51:27 AM
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All My Love - Dedicated to Carmen
All My Love -
through all the hard times you've been true, that's why i'm giving you
All My Love -
at times our relationship breaks, but girl i could never take
All My Love -
It may feel like your hearts bruised, but you could never lose
All My Love -
whatever plans we choose to take just know i'll never put at stake
your affection is a blessin girl you know this is true
my confession leaves now question that all my thoughts are about you
sometimes i want to kiss you
but even when we have issues, i still will miss you
seductive kisses got me wanting to make this Ms. my Mrs
love at times can be viscious, but staying with you is what my wish is
when everythangs rockin, there's no other option
we simply quit talkin when shit starts poppin
watch the passion explode as i passionately hold ya
The summers be staying hot and the winters grow colder
as long as you staying true i've already told ya
i'm giving you -
All My Love -
through all the hard times you've been true, that's why i'm giving you
All My Love -
at times our relationship breaks, but girl i could never take
All My Love -
It may feel like your hearts bruised, but you could never lose
All My Love -
whatever plans we choose to take just know i'll never put at stake
Through the stormiest of weather, we've always stayed together
when i've been sick you've made me better, ever since i met ya
and my love i give ain't fake like these other niggas pretend to
I'm a grown man who could be controllin in these cold lands
but with you as my women i ain't never to old to hold hands
i don't be kissin other bitches and i know those other niggas probably wishin
give you half of all my riches once you become my Mrs.
sure, i've been with bitches from cultures all over the world
but when i come home, you know that your my only girl
I'ma stick with you, i could never get sick of you
this ain't a risky move i know that i'm given you
All My Love -
through all the hard times you've been true, that's why i'm giving you
All My Love -
at times our relationship breaks, but girl i could never take
All My Love -
It may feel like your hearts bruised, but you could never lose
All My Love -
whatever plans we choose to take just know i'll never put at stake
DYNAMIC
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what yall think?
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good read man, you got a killer rhyme scheme and u got ur feelings across quite well
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props on the feedback, really appreciate it.
DYNAMIC
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are you talkin about the same girl as in the other one you wrote?
shit is still top notch my man. 8)
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I bet yo chick gon' love ya ass nigga. Lol. Tight drops.
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dayamn :'(
big propz
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nice shit man ..................dynamic m faried if u sing burn the fans :P :P