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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Jay_J on February 05, 2007, 07:28:15 PM

Title: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Jay_J on February 05, 2007, 07:28:15 PM
i hope you will like it more then 1st...

except the violins all enstruments and drums played by me... No sample!

just wating for comments...

http://www.myspace.com/yuceceylanli

Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: OG Snoopaveli on February 06, 2007, 03:00:32 AM
Good. Make a rap now  ;)
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: giuliuscaesar on February 06, 2007, 06:47:05 AM
that's good
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Bedford Iz Active on February 06, 2007, 06:47:26 AM
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm, meh.... ::) Not 100% sure. It is a good beat, but it doesn't rub off on me to feel like a need to begin spitting over it. It's iteeeee, just could be better, maybe just because i'm not feeling it too well. Keep an eye out for more feedback, i might not be the only one on this vibe.

Keep at it man.
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: d-nice on February 06, 2007, 08:46:36 AM
My only thing is that the keys could have been a little bit harder.
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Jay_J on February 06, 2007, 09:05:03 AM
My only thing is that the keys could have been a little bit harder.

which keys? the keys on the chourus part?
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: MEECH WELLS on February 06, 2007, 10:51:33 AM
cool jst need some new sounds and a rapper on it go listen 2 myinterview up wit nima i give up some gamewhr u can get some new sounds keep it up though my guy!
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Brazemac on February 06, 2007, 11:08:52 AM
I'm not really feelin this beat.
But keep doing what you do and perfect your craft. Peep the latest Meech interview for some game.
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Blu Lacez on February 06, 2007, 11:09:07 AM
Hey Cey..
Nie concept Ya got Goin Bro!!
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Tha Psycho Hustla on February 06, 2007, 01:57:59 PM
nice mayn.keep it goin´, dont give up i like yo shit.
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Tanjential on February 07, 2007, 11:41:11 AM
this is all live instrumentation cept for the synth violin? That's what the fuck is up, more music needs to be done like this. I just don't like how dark it is, but that's not to say it's not a good dark beat. it's a very good dark beat, I just don't like dark stuff that much unless it's dark and funky like something like 'evil deeds' for example. I'd like to hear your tightly performed live instrumentation doing something more upbeat. I think he just means the keys could have been made more prominent. the layers are nice, a very good sound though.

I'd like to hear something more upbeat and funky but that's just my preference. I really hope you continue to use live instruments, it's a great approach, it's actually the way I want to do hip hop as well as rock (but that's a little more of a no brainer with rock).

-T
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: UpstateboiBeats on February 07, 2007, 01:28:56 PM
turn that piano down!!! looudd my dude.  Good sample used....could be hotter, woulda used a different snare.  It's like a 6/10 but has 8/10 potential man.  Keep at it.
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Jay_J on February 07, 2007, 01:45:09 PM
turn that piano down!!! looudd my dude.  Good sample used....could be hotter, woulda used a different snare.  It's like a 6/10 but has 8/10 potential man.  Keep at it.

which piano? i used 2 different type piano on the beat... and i used no sample...
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: da_notorious_mack on February 07, 2007, 02:20:30 PM
lol ive been listening to much grime..that 2nd beat so needed to be 140bpm an chopped up slightly

thats just me though..an dont get me wrong..i could still flow like a muddafukka on dis...just dosent whet my current appetite for beats l8ely..

keep it up tho
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Mo Z. Dizzle on February 07, 2007, 02:37:57 PM
i dunno what it is but this beat (like your last one) also gives me a Bollywood vibe.

that's not a bad thing tho, a lotta ppl seem to enjoy the Indian thing.

it also sounds like it can be a very deep R&B track to me, although im sure some ppl could also rap over it as well.
Title: Re: my 2nd beat released on my myspace!.... I just want comments
Post by: Tanjential on February 07, 2007, 02:40:38 PM
turn that piano down!!! looudd my dude.  Good sample used....could be hotter, woulda used a different snare.  It's like a 6/10 but has 8/10 potential man.  Keep at it.

which piano? i used 2 different type piano on the beat... and i used no sample...

he means the melody/riff you looped.
-T