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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: QuietTruth on April 12, 2007, 06:59:25 PM
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My wordplay is like Sunday cuz I'm last of the weak
I'm about to run you out this battle so hold on to ur feet
U claimed u improved ur rhyme skill but wit what I seen
Nigga gotta get a girls name to become 'Mo-unique'
Homie even if dude get a rope your lyrics couldn't hang wit me
U gonna have to bite another niggas rhymes just to compete wit me
Your shit ain't even basic, Hip Hop is what we tryin' to be savin'
You thought you got acceptance here again but you just have to face it
After niggas said they nice shit, they 'sike it' like Raven
Bit the rhymes, swallowed the consequences, come on, how u think u gon replace it??
If you call urself 'Jem' I'ma help you 'die-mon' (diamond)
Gimme that Bez line to tuck in this nigga's coffin to give him something to lie on
U ain't nuthin' but a fake and nuthin' but a lame
Take this shit back to where ever you just came
Call me a religion when I write cuz rappers like u 'I slam'
'Ja - ovah' son, ur done, and I hope you understand
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dang that shit was fire, i didnt know u spit homie
props...
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Constipated pussy I'll beat the shit up-and-out of ya.
You the first weakling to step... buy a fuckin calender! (responce to his first two lines)
My bad on bein late, just don't care, you'll be leaded slow
"I mus" be real bored wastin time on this "nappy headed ho"!
How's that for wordplay, honest bitches I see'em dying...
Here I'll keep "Truth" quiet... make sure 9 bullets leave him "lying"!
Logic loves your rhymes, which shows the flaw in his name
I'm the one spittin fire, voters'll watch you ball up in flames!
Damage you, Destroy ya kidneys and merc who wants to lend you two.
Nigga I never lie, sometimes I just use my muscles to bend the truth!
You're rhymes got me sleepin sound, your flow be suckin dildos
Softest verses written... don't tell me... you bit a fuckin pillow!?
Why'd you volunteer to duel, Oh well it's practice for the belt
Tho I am flattered you set this time aside... to humiliate yourself!
Don't even try to spit better shit, here's my advice to this cat
Next time Truth... just stick the mic up your ass...
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Hot damn.
Votes?
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Both nigga is fire... but my nigga QuietTruth came harder no doubt..yall keep rippin an flippin tha gift
DYNAMIC
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Great lines from both sides
hard to choose which ones were my favourite for either side cause there was a few kickass ones
overall i give my vote to QuietTruth on this
props to the both of u tho, that was one hell of a battle
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Propz ya'll!
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Come on now, yall suck at postin votes, atleast help the people battlin elevate with some nice good ol' constructive criticism.
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Quiet Truth.
My wordplay is like Sunday cuz I'm last of the weak
I'm about to run you out this battle so hold on to ur feet
Well, to be totally honest this isn't that good of a punch, you should have probably opened with one of your better ones further down. Also Sunday is actually the first day of the week, but the wordplay was goin somewhere, just get the facts right. lol
U claimed u improved ur rhyme skill but wit what I seen
Nigga gotta get a girls name to become 'Mo-unique'
This however I was feelin, not played in anyway, a good original wordplay concepts. dope.
Homie even if dude get a rope your lyrics couldn't hang wit me
U gonna have to bite another niggas rhymes just to compete wit me
Eh, I ain't saying you bit this line, but that's probably the 10th time something similar has been used on me... ehh either way it's not the dopest punch.
Your shit ain't even basic, Hip Hop is what we tryin' to be savin'
You thought you got acceptance here again but you just have to face it
All filler... no punch come on QT
After niggas said they nice shit, they 'sike it' like Raven
Bit the rhymes, swallowed the consequences, come on, how u think u gon replace it??
Lol Damn, the raven line was murder... feelin that, no tips or criticism here. Good personal wordplay.
If you call urself 'Jem' I'ma help you 'die-mon' (diamond)
Gimme that Bez line to tuck in this nigga's coffin to give him something to lie on
I get the word play, but it was a weak punch, and I may be missing something with the Bez line.
U ain't nuthin' but a fake and nuthin' but a lame
Take this shit back to where ever you just came
No punch, don't waste precious line space with just rhymes, make the nigga hurt throughout.
Call me a religion when I write cuz rappers like u 'I slam'
'Ja - ovah' son, ur done, and I hope you understand
I was feelin the Islam line, lol that's good foreal, the last one... ehhhhhhh not so much
ME!
Constipated pussy I'll beat the shit up-and-out of ya.
You the first weakling to step... buy a fuckin calender! (responce to his first two lines)
Ey you know that was dope... lol
My bad on bein late, just don't care, you'll be leaded slow
"I mus" be real bored wastin time on this "nappy headed ho"!
Not sure if anyone got this, you would if you watched the news before the V-Tech shootin.
How's that for wordplay, honest bitches I see'em dying...
Here I'll keep "Truth" quiet... make sure 9 bullets leave him "lying"!
This one was stupid....
Logic loves your rhymes, which shows the flaw in his name
I'm the one spittin fire, voters'll watch you ball up in flames!
nothin major
Damage you, Destroy ya kidneys and merc who wants to lend you two.
Nigga I never lie, sometimes I just use my muscles to bend the truth!
nahhhhhh
You're rhymes got me sleepin sound, your flow be suckin dildos
Softest verses written... don't tell me... you bit a fuckin pillow!?
lol...soft rhymes, you bit a pillow...come on dude...
Why'd you volunteer to duel, Oh well it's practice for the belt
Tho I am flattered you set this time aside... to humiliate yourself!
No wordplay just straight punchline...
Don't even try to spit better shit, here's my advice to this cat
Next time Truth... just stick the mic up your ass...
Eh... just needed a last line.
Vote- Jem
Reason - Cuz he's so damn sexy.... blah blah lol
Anyway.... Kids that the best way to vote, it helps the battlers out... ya feel me....
Anyway, considering the bored is so damn inactive nowadays QT will get this without need for any other votes, good battle bra.
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^ That's whats up. I feel that my nigga. Propz though my dude, I really thought you was goin' to take this by madd votes. By something serious too, by some big ass numbers. Maybe the next few votes will be ran that way, if some niggas can get they asses in here!!
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"Call me a religion when I write cuz rappers like u 'I slam'
"I mus" be real bored wastin time on this "nappy headed ho"
both of those lines were real nice.
my vote goes to jem
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I need to come to this part of board more often, u people got some serious lyrics up in here,quiet truth won this 1, but props to both MCs tho.
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Call me a religion when I write cuz rappers like u 'I slam'
'Ja - ovah' son, ur done, and I hope you understand
^^ Just those two lines alone win you the battle.
Winner: Quiet Truth