West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on June 19, 2007, 05:44:51 PM
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Forget about it...Give a greedy stare
Lookin' in the mirror, I don't wanna be breathin' air
I wanna be some place else
My mind says the opposite of what my glum face tells
Guns spray shells, so I got one in my mandible
But I'm too fuckin' coward to let out the animal
What should I do?
Keep on livin a lie, or is it time to die the truth?
Fictional thoughts, everything around me's fake
I've always been asleep, even though I'm sound awake
I know that nothings perfect, but it's not even close
I know they tend to leave letters, but I'm gunna leave with flows...
Stare into my barrel of death... see a giant dwarf
Come hear a silent scream supplyin thee a dyin corpse
Not killing residents, pedestrians, or presidents
Just a thoughtless muthafucka killin off the evidence
It's pretty evident my soul is lost within my skeleton
Roll a blunt, smoke it up, now it's up there with the pelicans
Takin' so much shit, it's like catchin' a falling knife
If I ever had the chance, you'd catch me forestalling life...
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Not bad...
But the end wasn't very climatic.
Also, you were very vague in explaining why you were commiting suicide... you mentioned people around you were fake. But again, it seemed vague.
Anyway, I know this was probably from the heart so it's another dope spit from you as usual.
Now, as far as the content and subject matter. Your my homie, so I got to tell you this. You've taken a lot of unfair critisism in your life. It's often just because other people are jealous of your ambition. You shouldn't sell out for them. Just keep it moving man. Just keep it movin. It's like when you were only 14 and you were putting together an album back in the day, you were tight as hell... and your shit sounded so proffesional, and you were only 14! Not only that, but you put together a whole compilation album for the dubcc, you hooked me up with the first song I ever did.. and all these things you were doing with access to little or no equipment/oppurtunities. It was just your own ambition and creativity. Even now, your one of the most dynamic homies at the forum, no doubt. So, anyway, fuck the haters man. Only God can judge you. Peace.
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The end wasn't climatic? LOL. It's just a keystyle...I ended it by saying if I had the chance, I woulda' never started life...It's not even a real suicide letter or anything like that, it's just what I titled the keystyle...Everything is spelled out in metaphors though...That's how I've been writing keystyles lately.
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The end wasn't climatic? LOL. It's just a keystyle...I ended it by saying if I had the chance, I woulda' never started life...It's not even a real suicide letter or anything like that, it's just what I titled the keystyle...Everything is spelled out in metaphors though...That's how I've been writing keystyles lately.
Yeah.. I was just expecting you to kill yourself at the end.. so I was kind of dissapionted... From an artistic point of view, ofcourse.
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Guns spray shells, so I got one in my mandible
But I'm too fuckin' coward to let out the animal
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Kobe sucks
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great ::)
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great ::)
that was just a stupid joke, totally unrelated to the subject.........
anyway..... what else can I say related to the subject, honestly, I didn't think it was your best spit, and I didn't pick up on the metaphors.
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LOL. The whole thing is a metaphor. And it's not one of my best spits, it's a simple keystyle. When you read shit like "Stare into my barrel of death... see a giant dwarf" or "I've always been asleep, even though I'm sound awake" what do you think that is? Literal talk? A lot of my curent rhymes have been shit that you'd only understand if you really analyzed it and broke down what I meant... or maybe it's shit that would never even make sense to someone else, no matter how much they tried to understand it. I like to make rhymes that appeal more to me than the reader...PeACe
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LOL. The whole thing is a metaphor. And it's not one of my best spits, it's a simple keystyle. When you read shit like "Stare into my barrel of death... see a giant dwarf" or "I've always been asleep, even though I'm sound awake" what do you think that is? Literal talk? A lot of my curent rhymes have been shit that you'd only understand if you really analyzed it and broke down what I meant... or maybe it's shit that would never even make sense to someone else, no matter how much they tried to understand it. I like to make rhymes that appeal more to me than the reader...PeACe
Word...... I changed my mind, it was the best rhyme I ever heard in my life... I just needed it explained to me.
Lol... just playin man... it's all good, peace.
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Fuck you if you don't like it.
I like to make rhymes that appeal to me
8)
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^^if you like rhymes that only appeal to you, then why do you post it???
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ps: i actually think this keystyle is pretty good
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this is garbage nigga if u want real rap check out my trap star thread
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this is garbage nigga if u want real rap check out my trap star thread
LOL is I Get Money turning into weedhead all of a sudden?