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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: CodeCaine on October 18, 2007, 04:49:28 PM

Title: tryin to get back
Post by: CodeCaine on October 18, 2007, 04:49:28 PM
five minutes is all it'll take, to see if ya fake, ya cant skate
when the ice is still water, that girl ya called a hoe , yeah, thats someones daughter
but no you cant show respect cuz you supposed to be G, but thats when it happens
soemone like me comes across knockin ya to the floor, my own life is worthless so how can i value yours
i dont, i couldnt care less if i tried, and you lied when i stepped to ya face, im dying to die, ready to leave this place
so what can you do to me when im already gone, no sad song, cuz i was dead all along,


i dont know what i was trying here, it's been years so i tried to freestyle, anyway peace.
Title: Re: tryin to get back
Post by: G. Sean Peters on October 20, 2007, 04:22:20 PM
not bad except it doesn't look like it flows too well