West Coast Connection Forum
DUBCC - Tha Connection => West Coast Classics => Topic started by: So Much Style on May 26, 2001, 10:39:12 AM
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Lyrical confusion
This was somethin i just wrote messing around, its not easy to do, actually i think it is EXTREMELY dope..please rate this, i know its not the keystyle forum but i want some of u other to see it..
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my mind causes lyrical confusion/
creating illisions/ no solutions/
rhyme prosititution/ thats what im usin/
to sell records/ faster than a lepord/
peppered/ spotted like some checkers/
your bitch is wetter/ suckin on my nector/
but i can do better/ elector and representer/
Narrator is chosen/boastin kknowin i'll be/
writing a masterpeace/ watch the records increse/
deseased, the crease please leave/
i got some tricks up my sleeve/ so relieve everyone in my belief/
when i rhyme, i shine/ enuf to make u go blind/ every line/
creatin lyrical crime/ fuck a 9 i drop signs to show u its mine/
and if i dont tell/ i'll show/
hit below/the elbow/ u know/ its fatal/
fatal chances advanced to enhancedments i ran this/
on any planet/granted i am hit/i be screamin god damnit/cause im demandin/
and what i demend is what i open/im hopin/got u crokin and chockin/hot box smokin/
so i hope u come lyrically prepared/be scared/i declared and faired to swear/
on this rhyme itself/keebler elfs in the shelfs/tell/its bad for your health/
like a ray of ultra violet/i high but not there yet/i get/redirect to everybody left/
im in the atmosphere/sms in the dope gear/flyest thing to come out this year/
i will i promise/like nastrodamus/i taunt this/im on this/ like igaunas/
and lake moss/and frost/its lost/like crop/
circles/fulla purple/geeky urkel/ure wack, dont wanna get hit so u wear a snorkel/
around town/up down and around/i found/the mound/right about now/
causin likwidation/temptation/lyrical incarseration/what ure facin/
im like nicolas cage amillion faces/embrace this/but stay scritcly no hatas/
ure a phony/no homie/ya know me/og/vocally unholy/
so u get a lyrical check/in the neck/your voice box has been wrecked/with my dialect/
and metaphors/finish my chores/than scorn the vocal cords/
on my microphone/cause im home alone/just a homophone/ready to grab the chrome/
and thats all im about/i shout/im out like the dogg house/
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fuck u.
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like hey diggy what's the dealy with the new cracks you been done said, huh.
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It's Aight, Some Of It Is Tight, Some Is Kinda Wack...
The WAck Parts Would Be
fatal chances advanced to enhancedments i ran this/
on any planet/granted i am hit/i be screamin god damnit/cause im demandin/
and what i demend is what i open/im hopin/got u crokin and chockin/hot box smokin/
so i hope u come lyrically prepared/be scared/i declared and faired to swear/
on this rhyme itself/keebler elfs in the shelfs/tell/its bad for your health/
like a ray of ultra violet/i high but not there yet/i get/redirect to everybody left/
im in the atmosphere/sms in the dope gear/flyest thing to come out this year/
i will i promise/like nastrodamus/i taunt this/im on this/ like igaunas/
and lake moss/and frost/its lost/like crop/
circles/fulla purple/geeky urkel/ure wack, dont wanna get hit so u wear a snorkel/
That Just Don't Make Any Sense, And It's Not On Topic. You're Getting Better, Though...
Peace
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yeah it has no story at all..its just a bunch of lyrics thrown together to flow....
and alerg what are u talking about?
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Tell me what yall think of this one? I did it in 5 mins in class...It's kinda whack, I tried a new style...
I bang fags that look like skin heads/I even shoot the ones that been dead/Don’t step if you’re a pin head/Ya betta’ listen to what NIK said/Or I’ll burn you down instead/Ya don’t wanna end up a gimp in bed/Talk shit and you will win led/Or get shot with my Mack 10/Drive By with my Black Benz/And Jam on ya’ll like the Pac 10/And beat ya to all the way back then/I kill fag men/A bad friend/Amazing/‘Brow raising/Blazing/Racing/Neva Chasing/Neva pacing/I stay lacing/Beats/Can’t get beat/Never been defeate/Alwayz blazin like weed/Indeed/No greed/Fuck good deeds/I move ya with my mind like tella conices/Eat MC’s like Reaces Peaces/And Peaches/Hang you on the wall like Jesus/And murda ya whole family, includin ya neices/Use you like leases/Get in ya skin like leaches/Unreal/Real deal/Neva squeal/First meal/Ya betta’ feel/Or get peeled/Killed/Filled/With led/In ya head/Love watchin blood shed/But the colors red/So I dip you in Ice water till ya turn blue/Somethin new/For all of you/Read it through/Or I’ll demolish ya nutz like Mountain Dew/And Squeeze ‘em so hard, make ya scream hoodie hoo/And sell ‘em for CREAM like The Wu/“A muthafucka sayin bye 2 you”
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Yo Now_I_Know that rhyme was DOPE hommie
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Thanks...
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I bang fags that look like skin heads
I know what you meant but that line looks funny by itself. LOL
Nice rhyme man.
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LOL...I mean Bang Bang, not Howard Stern Bang..LOL