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Title: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: BigG on May 21, 2008, 11:24:23 AM
Man hearing this track with zero bass really hurt it...

So i decided to try to add some bass to it... Came out pretty nice i think...  Play the original and then play this and you will see a BIG DIFFERENCE....

Let me know what you guys think:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/12364308ec200b39/ (http://www.zshare.net/audio/12364308ec200b39/)
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: EFFeX on May 21, 2008, 11:34:22 AM
LOL... I actually started making one too, but got distracted and gave up, if I ever make another one I'll post it up.

It's not that bad, that's pretty much the vibe mine had... Good work!
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Bch on May 21, 2008, 11:40:45 AM
good shit.. heres my take on it the from the 1st chorus/hook to the end of the track.. everything sounds on point as far as rhythm and timing goes.. i would turn up the velocity on a few notes here and there because it seems like the bass ( i know it was your intention to) but it fades out TREMENDOUSLY so just up it on a few notes a lil

however the first verse is sloppy .. after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note  
the rest of it sounds rushed , velocity sounds off on alot of it  
just fix it player you got the rest down packed  ;)
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: BigG on May 21, 2008, 11:41:30 AM
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LOL... I actually started making one too, but got distracted and gave up, if I ever make another one I'll post it up.

It's not that bad, that's pretty much the vibe mine had... Good work!

man this made a big difference for me... i know to those bumpin this track through computer speakers, they probably dont care for this and wont hear a difference...

but man i got some nice subwoofer connected to my computer and it sounds WAYY better with the bass...  Maybe its just me..

man im a burn this on a disc and play it trough a car system see how it sounds...
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: BigG on May 21, 2008, 11:47:01 AM
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good shit.. heres my take on it the from the 1st chorus/hook to the end of the track.. everything sounds on point as far as rhythm and timing goes.. i would turn up the velocity on a few notes here and there because it seems like the bass ( i know it was your intention to) but it fades out TREMENDOUSLY so just up it on a few notes a lil

however the first verse is sloppy .. after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note 
the rest of it sounds rushed , velocity sounds off on alot of it 
just fix it player you got the rest down packed  Wink

yeah man thanks for the feedback...  I know i still got to work on it more...but i just did this like in half an hour and posted it up...

Im try to fix it if i can...  got to see what you mean though..  I dont get the second part your talking about. Where you say the 2nd note immediatley sticks out..
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: AnybodyKilla on May 21, 2008, 12:10:40 PM
Propz!!!
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: stephen619 on May 21, 2008, 12:20:24 PM
HaHa
Thanks
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Bch on May 21, 2008, 12:52:25 PM
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good shit.. heres my take on it the from the 1st chorus/hook to the end of the track.. everything sounds on point as far as rhythm and timing goes.. i would turn up the velocity on a few notes here and there because it seems like the bass ( i know it was your intention to) but it fades out TREMENDOUSLY so just up it on a few notes a lil

however the first verse is sloppy .. after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note 
the rest of it sounds rushed , velocity sounds off on alot of it 
just fix it player you got the rest down packed  Wink

yeah man thanks for the feedback...  I know i still got to work on it more...but i just did this like in half an hour and posted it up...

Im try to fix it if i can...  got to see what you mean though..  I dont get the second part your talking about. Where you say the 2nd note immediatley sticks out..


after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note  
^^ raise the bass up on that note in particular not too much though...  around 0.36- 0.37 theres a significant amount of drop in bass enough to where it throws off the track

tight tight doggy you got it though man just knock that shit out i wanna hear it when you get done wit it  :)
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: BigG on May 21, 2008, 02:53:37 PM
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after your first bass note which is cool cuz its raised to accentuate the bass.. the 2nd note immediately is WACK it sticks out like a sore thumb u need to dress that note up .. maybe add a tad bit just a lil more low end to keep it consistent with the first note.. since you went all out on the first note 
^^ raise the bass up on that note in particular not too much though...  around 0.36- 0.37 theres a significant amount of drop in bass enough to where it throws off the track

tight tight doggy you got it though man just knock that shit out i wanna hear it when you get done wit it  Smiley

oh alright...coo

ima try to work on it some more.
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: BigG on May 21, 2008, 09:20:54 PM
anyone else feeling this?
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Ridah662 on May 21, 2008, 09:23:21 PM
DOPE WORK BIG G.............
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: 187Proof on May 21, 2008, 10:10:51 PM
DOPE WORK BIG G.............
8)
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: marcin1712 on May 22, 2008, 04:50:33 AM
props for your time
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: ICHI THE KILLER on May 22, 2008, 05:05:23 AM
yeah sound better
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: TAKEMONEYENT on May 22, 2008, 06:25:02 AM
hes rapping too much likes hes doing a hip hop weekly, he needs to focus around the aura of the song more, his voice and flow didnt match the beat, akon killed the hook, there will be no video and it wont be a single
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: 187Proof on May 22, 2008, 06:29:46 AM
......................there will be no video and it wont be a single

Why do I have a bad feeling that this is going to really be the case with this track?
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Detox Iz Not Active on May 22, 2008, 06:38:54 AM
LMAO @ niggas adding bass to this



crooked got to be the dumbest nigga alive
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: EFFeX on May 22, 2008, 07:46:24 AM
LMAO @ niggas adding bass to this



crooked got to be the dumbest nigga alive

You love him don't lie.
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Ridah662 on May 22, 2008, 08:00:28 AM
LMAO @ niggas adding bass to this



crooked got to be the dumbest nigga alive
Crooked Must Be Doing Something Right, Keep Hating We Feed Off Hate Fool.... ;) Frenchie
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Outlaw ANOTHA on May 22, 2008, 08:24:40 AM
Nice drop, this track get's better with each listen.
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: BigG on May 22, 2008, 11:55:37 AM
yeah man im feeling it more and more.
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: 187_gangsta_crip on May 22, 2008, 03:49:18 PM
yeah man im feeling it more and more.
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: BigG on May 26, 2008, 09:39:51 AM
over 3,000 downloads  :)
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Let's Get Down on May 26, 2008, 07:13:38 PM
^Sounds much better 8)..Thanks for the track!
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: DerekNelson on May 28, 2008, 07:48:31 AM
Its called "re-mastering" the song/track.

I would not fuck with the EQs on the track/song, just adjust it on your stereo or sub.

easy.

I have not listened to this in my car yet, because the dynasty forums have some losers over there talking shit about people and making up false stories and claims about their own members that are not true, thus giving Crooked i a bad name, and makes listeners like me not want to listen to his music. I will check this 1 day in my car and compare them both if i remember too.

I did not waste my time a download this (why i came here was i thought it was a proper official rmx of sum sort), all these fan made and people fucking with the songs makes it more harder in the long run 4 all.
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Matty on May 28, 2008, 08:50:40 AM
is it just me or does that swooshing sound effect that plays in the beat really ruin things. its a common enough kinda sound but its done really badly/overdone here. it's really jarring and destorys the vibe - the track would sound cleaner and much better without it...
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Dopeisjay on May 28, 2008, 12:09:48 PM
dope sounds good props homie..
Title: Re: Crooked I ft Akon - Dream Big (BASS VERSION!!) (ZSHARE)
Post by: Spit Vicious on May 28, 2008, 12:21:51 PM
Hey that song is tight as fuck.