West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: TraceOneInfinite on August 09, 2008, 11:36:51 PM
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A win here plus a loss by StreetsAllSalute would get you into the championship.
A loss here and your eliminated from the tournament.
Unexplained votes can be appealed and may get tossed out.
...you know the rules...
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Niggas get madd that I got more lyrics than ohhla
Leavin' ya'll forced to bite like they Hank & Casanova
So I.E. this nigga versing me, ain't gonna get far
Becuz like a liquoir store his rhymes is 'bazaar'
Black like tar, so I get hot under fire
So dude is done, he got nuthin' on me like his priors
Wit the madd alias's, he sure likes to damn us
BUT he versing me, so we know he 'bananas'!!
My lyrics is somethang sick, close to what sars is
I'm like a drunk, cuz I know where the good bars is
..All up in my rhymes, niggas can't ya tell?
This homie couldn't drop somethang decent even if he fell
This battle is like Sausage and peppers, I keep the hotness in my verse
And Piff Tannen is that long meat, cuz his shit is the 'wurst'
Yeah..now take your tail and tuck in between your legs
Beuz you only here for the back ride like bicycle pegs
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haha i swear me and you..must have been the 1st two to drop in every round...nice verse
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haha i swear me and you..must have been the 1st two to drop in every round...nice verse
And likewise on yours, lol I hear you though.
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nice verse QT,
truth is evident to me, whys it quiet to you?
get a clue i'm fucking sicker than, tropical flu,
it was a valiant effort but your rhymes fell thru,
and now i'm the one you should look up to,
look at this slob, a grown man with no job
you should follow mom's career and polish men's knobs
but.. nice verse, didn't think you'd get that loose,
oh wait, thats because your style jacks papoose!
and i dont care you got more lines than whoever
cuz most of them are like 40 gloccs, not clever,
i'm contender slash offender, an all night bender,
you stay alone tender questioning your gender,
it's the drug free M-C, his brains' still emp-ty! plus,
your rhymes' played out, like don henley,
kid, stay friendly, if not i'll roast ya
you're frail, call it "anorexia nervosa"
and oh yeah, my rhymes are "bizarre"
but did you just compare your black ass to tar?
might as well throw some ether on yourself
cuz when it comes to a battle that ain't good for ya health.
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Def. likewise. Its just the waiting..
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it's been nearly a week and not enough votes... Something better happen soon or else I will do a thorough review and select the winner, who will then go to the championship round to face StreetsAllSalute.
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damn Piff killed it, my vote goes to him
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Niggas get madd that I got more lyrics than ohhla
Leavin' ya'll forced to bite like they Hank & Casanova
So I.E. this nigga versing me, ain't gonna get far
Becuz like a liquoir store his rhymes is 'bazaar'
Black like tar, so I get hot under fire
So dude is done, he got nuthin' on me like his priors
Wit the madd alias's, he sure likes to damn us
BUT he versing me, so we know he 'bananas'!!
My lyrics is somethang sick, close to what sars is
I'm like a drunk, cuz I know where the good bars is
..All up in my rhymes, niggas can't ya tell?
This homie couldn't drop somethang decent even if he fell
This battle is like Sausage and peppers, I keep the hotness in my verse
And Piff Tannen is that long meat, cuz his shit is the 'wurst'
Yeah..now take your tail and tuck in between your legs
Beuz you only here for the back ride like bicycle pegs
Some of your metaphors were on a proffesional leval as if Canibus wrote it. Like the ..."I must be a drunk.. best bars" and ..."you couldn't drop somethin decent if you fell". And "I got more rhymes than ohhla".
I felt you faltered a bit when it came to dissin him personally. At one point you just inserted the name "piff tannen" but it could have applied to anyones name. You did mention his use of alias, I give u points for that, but he's a very well known poster and you could have done much better attacking him rather than just dropping random metaphors.
A few of yur bars I didn't understand like the hank and casanova thing or the "bazar" thing maybe you could come back and explain cause some of those lines look like the type that get lifted (biten) from other sites.
Use of metaphor- +10
Attacking piff personally- +1
bonus points for droppin first- + 3
total score- +14
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nice verse QT,
truth is evident to me, whys it quiet to you?
get a clue i'm fucking sicker than, tropical flu,
it was a valiant effort but your rhymes fell thru,
and now i'm the one you should look up to,
look at this slob, a grown man with no job
you should follow mom's career and polish men's knobs
but.. nice verse, didn't think you'd get that loose,
oh wait, thats because your style jacks papoose!
and i dont care you got more lines than whoever
cuz most of them are like 40 gloccs, not clever,
i'm contender slash offender, an all night bender,
you stay alone tender questioning your gender,
it's the drug free M-C, his brains' still emp-ty! plus,
your rhymes' played out, like don henley,
kid, stay friendly, if not i'll roast ya
you're frail, call it "anorexia nervosa"
and oh yeah, my rhymes are "bizarre"
but did you just compare your black ass to tar?
might as well throw some ether on yourself
cuz when it comes to a battle that ain't good for ya health.
Your opening had some nice flow but still I felt it was weak. How played out are those "Quiet Truth, truth is evident" disses of his name.
It was refreshing to see you go at him personally a little bit. Like you flipped his "bazaar" line around on him. However, you lose some points on your personal disses because you said he's a "grown man" but dude is only 15 or 16 I think.
That whole series where you went after him about bitin Papoose that was the highlight of your verse. Your flow and disses were all on point for a series of bars you were unfadeable.
Then you finished with just some so-so rhymes.
So beginning was a little weak, middle superb, finish lukewarm.
Flow- +6
Personal attacks +5
metaphors, disses +3
score: 14
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This one was too close to call. I found both verses to be equal... so I will have to defer to the only other person who voted in this thread...
Lunatics vote stands...
PiffTannen wins and moves on to the Championship
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Well propz, esp. to Piff Tannen.
Nah biting from other sites never that homie! Hank & Casanova ya know the biting situation word? Sugarhill Gang. And a liquior store is also called a 'Liquior Bazaar', well one day I saw a a liqior store and it was called 'Liquior Bazaar' and when I was thinking of somethang to call this niggas lyrics I thought well they 'bizarre' and that shit just popped in my head quick, that's all.
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Well propz, esp. to Piff Tannen.
Nah biting from other sites never that homie! Hank & Casanova ya know the biting situation word? Sugarhill Gang. And a liquior store is also called a 'Liquior Bazaar', well one day I saw a a liqior store and it was called 'Liquior Bazaar' and when I was thinking of somethang to call this niggas lyrics I thought well they 'bizarre' and that shit just popped in my head quick, that's all.
Dope man... thanks for the explaination