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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: bez on October 02, 2002, 01:52:27 PM
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Forgive Me by Bez
Still alive and breathin, not stealin,
No more makin a livin off drug dealin,
Cos I've got a wound that could do with healin,
Nobody in the world knows what I'm feelin,
So now I take things easy and see things clearly,
I got time to appreciate the people around me,
The ones that stood up and showed bravery,
Taught me what a man is really suppose to be,
The question is whats next but nobody knows,
I grew up and flowered like a bright red rose,
But the petals started fallin, my roots where exposed,
And you can't turn back down the road you chose,
I'm just sick and tired of the way I'm livin,
Always loosin its about time I did some winnin,
I never flash a smile cos people always grinnin,
I'm sorry God for my sin's and I hope I'm forgiven,
Forgive me,
(Chorus) So many people just try to decieve me,
Actin my friend when they've seen me on tv,
What the hell do these foe's expect me to be,
I don't respect you, so please forgive me,
(Chorus) So many people just try to decieve me,
Actin my friend when they've seen me on tv,
What the hell do these foe's expect me to be,
I don't respect you, so please forgive me,
I hope forgivness is the sign on things to come,
Wanna be able to stand still and not have to run,
Wanna be able to have fun without packin a gun,
Make it to the day when I see the face of my son,
Don't like fighting for the right to stay alive,
Buts that what I'll do if I gotta survive,
I'll sweat blood and tears but I will not hide,
Until I've give life a go or at least I've tried,
Anticipating the journey in which I'll embark,
No doubt at times things will look dark,
But I hope you belive that I'm a bright spark,
And stick to me like glue until I depart,
Like a teacher I'll always try to teach a lesson,
Cos you can be gone in a second without no messin,
Commited many crimes which I aint confessin,
Every person in the world should count their blessin,
So come on,
(Chorus) So many people just try to decieve me,
Actin my friend when they've seen me on tv,
What the hell do these foe's expect me to be,
I don't respect you, so please forgive me,
(Chorus) So many people just try to decieve me,
Actin my friend when they've seen me on tv,
What the hell do these foe's expect me to be,
I don't respect you, so please forgive me,
So I hope tommorrow don't come early,
Cos I got a pain that eats through my body yearly,
And everytime my life gets lonely and scary,
I got that pain there to always remind me,
That I take to much stuff in life for granted,
I should just be thankful I'm even on this planet,
But I feel like an outlaw I'm always wanted,
Maybe its just me and I finally lost it,
But I give love and praise to the true friends,
That ones that I know will stick with me to the end,
The support and laughter I'll never forget,
Hope you relax in life and make a good profit,
And kids please for God's sake do right,
Don't follow Bez down this piterful plight,
Use inner strength and courage and the power of might,
Then unlike me you should hopefully sleep at night,
Forgive me,
(Chorus)x4 So many people just try to decieve me,
Actin my friend when they've seen me on tv,
What the hell do these foe's expect me to be,
I don't respect you, so please forgive me,
Just be thankful your liven,
Life is the only present thats worth given,
If you commit sins then just hope your forgiven,
Pray and ask God. Forgive me!
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damn man.. that was tight shit..
I grew up and flowered like a bright red rose,
But the petals started fallin, my roots where exposed,
And you can't turn back down the road you chose,
^^ I loved them lines ^^
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COME ON MORE REPLIES.
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more replies please
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More replies please.
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please more replies
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Fuck you overlooking ignorant twats.
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I hate you all.
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fuck everyone
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PLEASE REPLY!!!
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Man, i feel ya.. I mean check our collabo, hardly any replies.. and any shit that i post gets no love either.. its bullshit.. But like i said before.. its a tight rhyme
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Man, i feel ya.. I mean check our collabo, hardly any replies.. and any shit that i post gets no love either.. its bullshit.. But like i said before.. its a tight rhyme
thanks man but this keystyle board is wack, I spend along time writing tracks which I used to love getting replies from but no 1 is arsed anymore. I am gunna keep posting on this track until it gets at least 10 rating. Thanks buddy. Bez
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lol alot of shit hardly gets any replies...I overlooked this one...nice track, not ur best one though
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still waiting for more replies ppl!
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here some feed back,
the topic was cool, but ive heard it all to much,
overall nice verse, good style and im out
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I grew up and flowered like a bright red rose,
But the petals started fallin, my roots where exposed,
And you can't turn back down the road you chose,
dem lines ripped ish up,i swear the only rhyme i aint felt of yours was ya hit em up,cus dat i believe dat song classic and shouldnt be tampered wit,i didnt even like the eminem cover
i give this 1 7/10
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From what I've seen from you, this is getting better. I like it, and am sorry for sleeping. Tight rhyme homie.
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From what I've seen from you, this is getting better. I like it, and am sorry for sleeping. Tight rhyme homie.
its ok mate, thanks for the reply.
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