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Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: :-:Mistah Menace:-: on September 02, 2002, 12:36:50 AM

Title: (Rate It Plz)
Post by: :-:Mistah Menace:-: on September 02, 2002, 12:36:50 AM

Yo, When Ya Were Born The Doctor "Slapped-Your-Mother"
I Punch Like A Pneumatic Drill  Just "Tapped-Your-Brother"  :o

Sit ~Down~ - You Make The Place Look ~Inoperative~
My Rhymes So ~Significant~ I'm The ~Operative~  >:(

So Small Like The Little Man On Top Of A "Wedding-Cake"

MC(Scratch)MC Menace

You Need To Awake Cuz Ya Nothin' But A "Spreading-Fake"

There Is More ~Meat~ On A Vegetarians Toothpick Than On Ya ~Cock~
This ~Rap~ Causin' You To Have A Hard ~Knock~

MuthaFucka, Act Your Age And Not Ya "Dick-Size"
Even Senseless People Cud Figure Out This "Pricks-Disguise"  ;D

MC(Scratch)MC Menace

Peace Ya'll....

Title: Re: (Rate It Plz)
Post by: M Dogg™ on September 02, 2002, 01:05:55 AM

Simple hard rhymes. A nice try. Out of everything, I give it a 7.5 outa 10, about average.

Title: Re: (Rate It Plz)
Post by: :-:Mistah Menace:-: on September 02, 2002, 01:30:17 AM

Thanks M-Dogg, Peace...

Title: Re: (Rate It Plz)
Post by: da_notorious_mack on September 02, 2002, 01:32:13 AM

Quote

Simple hard rhymes. A nice try. Out of everything, I give it a 7.5 outa 10, about average.

See,even the competition realize u got skills.Nice Ryme I d give it 8 outta 10

Title: Re: (Rate It Plz)
Post by: :-:Mistah Menace:-: on September 02, 2002, 01:37:08 AM

Thanks For The Feed Back...

More Wud Be Nice....Cud You Tell Me Were I Cud Improve Aswell Plz...Thanks

Peace..

Title: Re: (Rate It Plz)
Post by: Reef on September 02, 2002, 07:58:36 AM

Some cool punches.. Simple but hard.. Good work..

peace