West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: Tanjential on May 04, 2002, 01:54:41 PM
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I wrote this a few months back,just looking for response
title: Angels Dance & Angels Die(There Is No Music To Match My Soul)
Angels fight Angels cry
Angels dance and Angels die
If God is a man,then woman is a devil
Manic depression is that in which i revel
and wallow in and regurgitate
No matter how much pain i have,it still hurts to take
but incoming vindicators stay on their roll
why do i bother?there's no music that can match my soul
I need a requiem for my happiness death,thriving social life's death
I'm an ugly reject,Impossible to accept
Everybody's perfect except me,i was meant to be empty
She loves everyone except me
Take me for granted,neglect me
That's what everyone else seems to think is the thing to do
No matter what good i try to bring to you
My minds shrouded in jumbles
In a ferocious social jungle
drain what i have to offer,and leave me,that's what everybody else does
Please Kill me,i'll never be as good as my old self was
peace-Tanjint
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humm.... interesting. I can tell a lot about this rhyme, and I also see a lot of other guys in here, myself included in this rhyme. Nice work.
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that's cool that you got your own interpretation out of it,because real poetry doesn't say anything so much as it opens up doors to thought and interpreting, but when i wrote this it had nothing to do with anybody on wcc,no offense, nothing wrong with interpretation,i really appreciate it,thanks man,peace-Tanjint
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yo man I liked it...it was pretty tite..keeep spitting..intresting