West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: NoT on March 06, 2002, 04:44:18 AM
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Fuck claimin' emcee, I call ya'll "token" linguists ~
What?! You tryin' to beat me with that bullshit broken english?! ~
I count victories like "quarters", you ain't reached "half" my skill yet ~
I mount bitches like horses, you ain't breached half of my ville yet ~
Fuck personal disses this directed at all fake bitches ~
Biters, liars, those dissin' hip hop with claimed riches ~
"Redirectin'" "point shots", fuck how many points I got ~
Affectin' more emcees than combined effects of coke and pot ~
Now ya'll is surrounded by padded walls screaming for help ~
People walkin' by you with random insults, you believe you in hell ~
I been salted, seasoned and spiced, I lash out with "red hot" verses ~
Designed to make emcees nervous, closed curtains on that jerk's spits ~
I bust out lines 'bout scientists, shots bucked off, shattering irises ~
Fuck coming with guns drawn, I use bats to splatter ya kind, bitch ~
[EDIT]Just saying that this honestly ain't directed at anyone, I just thought the "padded walls" bit fit as an example.
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That was an excellent rhyme.. as always from the Nick of Time.
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nice.......
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nice spit homie
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*Starts going crazy due to lack of feedback.*
Come on, I vote on just about every battle around here and I'm always down to comment on other's ish. Please, all I want is your opinion. I don't care if you tear my verse to pieces and knock my styles. I just want feedback of some kind!
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yo homie NOT..dont be disheartened due to lack of feedback .. this ish u dropped is dope as fuck .u should ave dropped this for some battle.. but i guess the "padded" says it all .. lol
newayz back to da ryme
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I count victories like "quarters", you ain't reached "half" my skill yet ~
I mount bitches like horses, you ain't breached half of my ville yet ~
been salted, seasoned and spiced, I lash out with "red hot" verses ~
Designed to make emcees nervous, closed curtains on that jerk's spits ~
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KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK ... !!!
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yo homie NOT..dont be disheartened due to lack of feedback .. this ish u dropped is dope as fuck
Thanks for the feedback, I was getting a little crazy there...
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;D I agree with Deadsoulja's opinion. That "seasoned, spiced" shit was brilliant!
Peace!
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Thanks for the feedback, AMC. I appreciate that. Some more feedback from other peeps would be nice though.
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tight shit homie. good flow to it. n yah, tha "pad" shit.....did fit nice. so even tho it aint "directed" at no one....sumhow sumbody came to mind. LOL
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tha "pad" shit.....did fit nice. so even tho it aint "directed" at no one....sumhow sumbody came to mind. LOL
LOL yeah.. I got the exact same feeling... ;D
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How come this never got any more responses. Everyone here should peep this because I ALWAYS give feedback, be it good or bad. You're just sleeping bitches if you don't at least peep and respond.
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::) Since that maxi shit everybody's gettin' lazy... and the newbies are the laziest ...shame on them!
Peace!