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Title: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 01, 2002, 04:33:38 AM: i wanna battle u ... i know u wanna retire, so lets make this short....

12 bars max
first to 5 votes (3-0, KO)
48 hours reply

u're down??
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 01, 2002, 06:53:42 AM: I'm Down. Probably Drop Just Before The 48 Hour Deadline.
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 01, 2002, 07:27:50 AM: im postin a well written rhyme with 99% equal bars.... i hope yall reading it carefully and try to understand it before voting

AfRican RhYMer EntErS The BaTtlEFielD With InFraRedVisIoN LoCKED At ThE TaRgET .:.:.:. No WaY For tHE TaRgET To EscAPE FrOm ThE CLaWs Of DEaTH AnY LonGEr... MuAhAhAhahHAhahAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAH
[Introduction]
"I" Stands For "Isotope", Like A Chameleon, Whenever Needed, I'm Able To Change My Shape
"B" Stands For "Biochemical", Im Dangerous like "Hussein" and "Bin Laden", I Shoot Toxic When I Rape
"O" Stands For "Oral", I Adjust My Dick, U Wanna Swallow It, But Forget That, It Aint Your Fate[VERSE]
Call me "HOLLYWOOD HOGAN", ill scratch your "CAR", "LIKE-BEFORE" when it's "WAR", "STUPID-WHORE"
check my "WOOD-SLOGAN": 'i'll chop you down to the 'FLOOR', like Reggie Miller, I-BO "always SCORES"
you're dealin with the Human "FRANK'N'STEIN", so to late to "RESIGN", betta "COMBINE"-your-"FORCES"
I-BO easly "BANK-YOUR-SIGN", belivin that im bein defeated is like "DEBTING-ON-THE-WRONG-HORSES"
behold this "LYRICz" rectangular SHAPE, foo, you gotta take "PILLZ", to steal what i have "CONCURRED"
my victory is "PYRRHIC", I-BO LYRICly "RAPE" the hell outta your wicked "SKILLZ", cuz u'r shit is "ABSURD" ***
"when we battle", you cant tell what my next "MOVE-GONNA-BE", even though the result is "PREDICTED"
the area u'r tresspassin in is "RESTRICTED", i got right to pull my glocks but still avoid bein "CONVICTED"
post u'r rhyme, im in the mood of "readin-a-JOKE", no mercy will be shown, u've "succedin-to-PROVOKE"
shall i compare us??: you're like "COKE-WITH-NO-GAZ", emptiness, like "A-BROKE-MAN-WITH-NO-CASH"
my battle stats "INCREASES" when breakin your flow in parts, so raw, Logic callin backup from "POLICES"
u got ugly 'sisters', but ill fuck your "NIECE'S", after i "CEASES" you wack flow and brakes you in "PIECES"

AfRican RhYMer LeAveS The bATTleFIelD WitH DeAD BoDieS LaYInG AlL OVeR..... AfRican RhYMer ProClaIms ViCTory

no beef... just spits....

*** a pyrrhic víctory is a vicory with same strategy as "Pyrrhus".. "Pyrrhus was an old commander who defeated the romans Twice...
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 12:10:31 AM: Quick Keystyle:

Running With The Classic-Emcees, Writing Rhymes On This Drastic-Spree ~
Loss Count At 3 For KO, You Screamed "Dont Face Me" With An Enthusiastic-Plea ~
Up Until A Degree, You Might Be Able To Face Logic The Lyrical-Master ~
Then I Start To Spit Faster, And Deliver The Ultimate Satirical-Blaster ~
Tables Have Turned To A Disaster, Watch How I Snap Your Neck-Vertabre ~
Watch This Verbal Display, Use My Words As A Gun, The Ill Teck-Spray ~
Now Your In An Untidy Disarray, Way Too Easy For Me To Elevate-My-Skills ~
My Flow Can Activate-Chills, When Its Fully Dedicate-To-Ya-Spills ~
Getting Fag Thrills, I-BO The Ho, Heard Your French Raps And Its All-Slow ~
Delivering A Wealthy Blow, Watch Out Below, You Best Recall-My-Flow ~
Health On Low, Always My Foe, Face Your Destiny That This King Brings ~
Just Straight Up Heat, No Strings, When You Sing Ya Couldnt Get High With Wings ~

Votes Please......
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: 757_tha_illest on March 02, 2002, 02:38:27 AM: ill have to go with IBO on this
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: 'Illicit' on March 02, 2002, 02:43:49 AM: well I-Bo was tight for sure, but the bars sounded too long at times. good punches though. but I gotta go with Logic here, his kept me on track. but still close imo.

peace
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 02, 2002, 02:51:28 AM: Quote
link=board=keystyle;num=1015000418;start=0#3 date=03/02/02 at 06:10:31]Quick Keystyle:
Delivering A Wealthy Blow...

plz dont ::) ... lol

i didnt felt like my bars sounded to long...

anyway.. 1-1

keep voting
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: 'Illicit' on March 02, 2002, 02:54:05 AM: im not talkin bout all of em, no disrespect,
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: infinite59 on March 02, 2002, 04:07:47 AM: Quote
i
my victory is "PHYRRIC", I-BO LYRICly "RAPE" the hell outta

Yo....Take out I-Bo's all caps and these verses looked the exact same. You both had ill flows, broke your sentences (bars) down into three parts, often 3 rhymes per bar. Ya'll both lacked concentration, talking bout three different things in just one bar, all over the place.....And I-Bo used the word Pyrric, which means victory at too great a cost....If he won this battle, then he still took a pretty good ass-beating..... I'm going to have to score this a tie, there was no clear winner.

Logic: 3.3
I-Bo: 3.3

It's 2-2..... 1 vote for each of you.
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 02, 2002, 04:09:45 AM: my finger only slipped on the "h" ..insted of: "PYRRHIC", i wrote "PHYRRIC"...a pyrrhic víctory is a vicory with same strategy as "Pyrrhus".. "Pyrrhus was an old commander who defeated the romans Twice...

i hope all confusions are solved now... btw, i belive my bars does have a meaning... the multis are connected to eachover...

still 1-1 (ties dont counts as 2 votes...)

(im editing my rhyme to correct the misstake)
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 05:13:45 AM: Aight Thanks For The Votes Y'all.....

I-Bo Don't Get So Heated Because People Give You Constructive Critism. You Should Take It Onboard.
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 02, 2002, 05:28:54 AM: i didnt get heated.. i just explained myself

if im feeling that im bein misunderstood, i gotta defend myself... thats how i am...

keep voting
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 05:32:44 AM: Quote
i didnt get heated.. i just explained myself

if im feeling that im bein misunderstanded, i gotta defend myself... thats how i am...

keep voting

Fair Enough Then.

Infinite, Would You Mind Choosing The Better Then?!
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Naz-T on March 02, 2002, 06:29:01 AM: Damn, nice shit both of ya'll, ok I was gonna vote quick, but I am insecure, So I'l just have to analyze as much as I can, in order to be sure my vote is right.

*ok, this is me talking to myself..*

Ok, I-Bo had a tight flow, I noticed that his sentences rhymed, almost comletely, giving his flow a 4.6/5, becoz of the good rhymin. Nice multis, and nice vesre overall, most punches were hardm but some were a bit easy, not easy ( like real easy ) but for example the first line isn't "HARD".
BUt this nicely went harder int he sentences below that one.
Quote
you're like "COKE-WITH-NO-GAZ", emptiness, like "A-BROKE-MAN-WITH-NO-CASH"

I like that line. So overall I have to give punches and multis comibined a 4.1/5 .

so average a 4.35

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[/glow]

Logic came hard, nice shit, I read this rhyme easy, so the flow was good, I'd give the flow a 4,7/5 becoz of the equal sentences, there were a fe incomplete multis. but stil good multis. an 'allright' wordplay/methaphor's, less than I-Bo's. punches were hard, but no real wordplays/methaphor's just rhyming, I'd give that part a 4/5 ( not bad at all )

average a : 4.35

damn lol.
ok fuck...ehm lemme read it one more time, I don't wnna vote no tie.

ok, I ma have to go for.......I-BO or Logic..I think I-BO.
for one reason, even though Logic's wordLAY was better, Ibo's WordPLAY and punches were more sophisticated ( deeper ) thaz the only reason, it just seems like he put more effort to it.

but close shit.

vote - I-BO.
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: KVB on March 02, 2002, 06:31:40 AM: I felt I-BO's rhyme.. it was tight... but Logic came harder with some powerful punchlines that was much better than I-BO's, IMO. (I got the feeling immediately after reading Logic's verse) But this was another tight battle.

Vote = Logic

Peace
~1~
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 02, 2002, 06:32:59 AM: 2-2

keep voting
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 06:35:38 AM: Thanks For Voting Everyone.... :)
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Miss NWA Whoorider on March 02, 2002, 06:39:41 AM: IBO came hard but Logic came faster..........

vote-logic
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 07:00:50 AM: 3-2... :o This Has Been A Close Match.
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 10:17:18 AM: 3-2.....uPpIn......

Come On You Guys, Me And I-B0 Vote On Loads Of Joints Here.
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: doggmastah on March 02, 2002, 10:44:49 AM: My vote: Logic

I voted for Logic cuz he said alot in simple but wonderfully keystyled rhymes, but i gotta say that I-Bo mastered superb his flow!

Peace!
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: DeaDSouLjaH on March 02, 2002, 10:46:20 AM: I-BO REVIEW
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Shit i think this is da best ryme i've read from ya ... i know u must have spit shit betta than this b4.... but to me this is your best... of all that i've read .. well this verse scored a lotta points on flow and multis, every bar was rymin ..
da punches like naz-t had said ... were kinda inconsitent... u were real hard...sumtimes but later..slacked off a bit..
overall a very good 12 bar verse.. highlights are da amazing flow and da multis

LOGIC REVIEW
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This verse... had a real gr8 flow and edged out I-B0's in terms of flow , now comin to da punches.. your best punches werent as good as I-BO's best punches...even though they were still very good .. and da wordplay wasnt quite amazing ...just "okay" .. highlights of this ryme : da flow and da punches..

Okay, even though my reviews look like I-BO had won this clearly..it was still difficult to vote on it ... but i jus think I-BO put in a lotta effort and his barz were a teedy weedy bit more complex so .. thatz y i think he won this battle

VOTE=I-BO
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 10:49:09 AM: 4-3, This Is A Very Close Battle Indeed.....The Closest I've Been In I Believe. Thanks For Voting You Two.....
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Reef on March 02, 2002, 10:56:43 AM: this was a really close battle people... I-BO tended to be deeper an spat on a more sophisticated level (as naz t said), but logic jus came out an hit pretty hard. So i think ima have to go with logic on this one. No disrespect I-BO.

My Vote: Logic
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Maestro Minded on March 02, 2002, 11:00:06 AM: my goal with this verse was to spit as equal bars as possible.. didnt cared much about punches and flow

3-5

congrats logic
Title: Re: .:I-BO:. ~vS~ .:Logic:.
Post by: Hittman on March 02, 2002, 11:00:33 AM: Thanks For Voting Everyone. I'm Taking A Break From Text Battles (I'll Probably Drop Stuff For The Battle League Though, LOL).....And I Will Drop Collabs And Crew Shit. But Its Cool To Win My Last Battle (For Awhile). When I Come Back I'll Be Tighter Then Ever. :)