West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: DeaDSouLjaH on February 27, 2002, 09:06:36 AM
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Logic.. i will drop if u accept.. .no beef...aiight??!
RULES
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bar limit : 15-20
first to 3 , K.O
first to 5 wins..
Crew votes allowed coz i trust everyone on this board..will cast honest votes..but pls do explain them ..
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I Was Going To Take A Break From Writing And Competing In Battles, But, Seen As I Know I'll Be Up For A Good Battle With You....I'm Down. Don't Expect A Spit Straight Away Though.
PS - I'm Cool With Your Rules....You Can Spit First, Or Wait For Me. Either Way I Ain't Bothered.
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k...Logic here's mine ...
neva suffered from WRITER'S BLOCK , my neva endin lyrical STOCK, like imposin UN sanctions on IRAQ/
KNOCK, KNOCK ..who's there ? opened da door itz Deadsouljah your worst NIGHTMARE who jus gonna UNLOCK his GLOCK/
herez a WCC PRESS RELEASE , ""DEADSOULJAH da "emcee killah " has escaped from DA-POLICE, LOGIC has already been DECEASED/
Spiritual leaders preach love and PEACE, but Deadsouljah's hate lines jus continue to expand like they were OBESE, emcee casualties INCREASE/
you'll be asking for pain KILLERS , i pull my lyrical shotguns TRIGGAS , your lines artificial jus like dat band called da "GORILLAZ"/
my rymes supported by "metas n punches" like they were "TAJ MAHAL"** PILLARS, while you're is a composition of mere FILLAZ/
Logic was so WEARY, upon hearing dat he was gonna be da fuckin BENEFECIARY, of DEADSOULJAH'S complex RYME THEORY
my lines possess death tones that are EERIE , u already lyin dead on da floor and your poor momma all TEARY/
i'll put all your minds in a TRANCE , turn u into smitherin debris with one GLANCE, giving no one a CHANCE to ADVANCE/
this aint no shakespeare ROMANCE , quit this shit and start TAP DANCE, an area where by CHANCE u mite ENHANCE /
your ryme can be CLASSIFIED-AS-AN-EX-FILE , even "mulder and scully" will be MYSTIFIED-by-this-WORD PILE/
this ryme gonna be deep enuff to EXIT-THRU-YOUR-SPINE, and rebound back before you SPIT-a single-WACK-LINE/
in to your room u jus HAULED-MANSON ,to add to da fun u even CALLED-HANSON, and then displayed your STRIP DANCIN/
i'm purely ADVANCIN , while u take gay's GLANCIN , thatz your only way of gettin some FINANCIN /
DeAdSoULjAh shall SLASH-YOUR-JUGULAR-VEIN, and lyrically,verbally SMASH-YOUR-UNSPECTACULAR-BRAIN /
you write lines with IMMENSE-STRAIN , but upon reachin me itz ineffective coz I can CONDENSE-PAIN /
your rymes so wack b4 u dropped it was UNREPAIRABLE-DEBRIS, i bring da heat and take it to an UNBEARABLE-DEGREE/
you and your rymes SEEM-TO-SUFFER-CONTRACTIONS , my rymes like a force field it JUST-BUFFERS-REACTIONS/
Religous beliefs , people STRONGLY-BELIEVE-IN , but winnin this battle is how u WRONGLY-RELIEVE-WITHIN/
** TAJ MAHAL ..is one of the wonders of the world and is situated in Agra - India
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damn, deadsouljah ur fuked, cause logic is hot, im kidding but souljah watch your back, cause he is gonna come hard....lol
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neva suffered from WRITER'S BLOCK
bitch lol u know why :P
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bitch lol u know why :P
dawm .. .LOL
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damn, deadsouljah ur fuked, cause logic is hot, im kidding but souljah watch your back, cause he is gonna come hard....lol
LOL, Erm, Thanks I Guess. But At The Moment I Ain't No Mood For Dropping A Rhyme. I've Got Little Time - So I Will Be Able To Hook Something Saturday Sometime....Don't Worry Though I Ain't Backing Down.
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link=board=keystyle;num=1014843997;start=0#6 date=02/28/02 at 14:41:34]
LOL, Erm, Thanks I Guess. But At The Moment I Ain't No Mood For Dropping A Rhyme. I've Got Little Time - So I Will Be Able To Hook Something Saturday Sometime....Don't Worry Though I Ain't Backing Down.
no probz wid me ...
;D ;D
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lets go deadsouljah, brown 4 life.....
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My Weakest Verse To Date...... I Ain't No Mood To Rhyme.
Putting It Down For The Killer Internet Gang-Slayerz ~
Time To Step Onto The Melanin Scene And Hang-Playerz ~
Say Your Prayers, Watch Out For This Whole New-Stage ~
Getting Down To The Ripping Because I'm Through-Rage ~
As You Engage, I Step Up Another Point On The Record ~
I'm Onboard, An This Whole New Scheme Will Be Adored ~
Face It Youve Just Got Floored, Melanin Rule-Nothing ~
Faking Bling Bling Long Remains A Utterly Cruel-King ~
DedSouljah Aint Shit, Stole A Whole Style From Blade ~
KVB & Illicit Damn They Easy To Fade, Time To Invade ~
Start The Crusade, I'm Going To Bring This To An End ~
Leave You Dead, Fool You Aint A Muthafucking Souljah ~
I'm The Colder, Goin To Put Two Holes In Ya Shoulder ~
Best Listen To What I Will-Say, Hold It Until-I-Slay ~
Bodies Starting To Decay, Stoned On This Pill-Buffet ~
Your One Of The Cynical Foes, I'm Delivering 9 Blows ~
Rocking Your Souls With Boulders, The Wrath Of Flows ~
I Contemplate Clicking Send, Hell I Shouldnt Pretend ~
DeadSouljah - Never My Homie, Tends To Fake A Friend ~
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No Beef Homie....
....I Was Joking About The Part Of You Stealing Your Style From Blade.
;D
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link=board=keystyle;num=1014843997;start=0#10 date=03/01/02 at 13:47:40]No Beef Homie....
....I Was Joking About The Part Of You Stealing Your Style From Blade.
;D
hey no probz man ... i know u didnt mean it .. ;) ;)
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oh i forgot.... ppl itz time to vizzote!!!!
pz
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Good battle, guys. Hell... great battle... LOL. Anyway, here's my little review:
DEADSOULJAH REVIEW
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Well, you followed my advice and tried some multis and it turned out well. Basically, that's what elevates this piece and makes it your best ever. You've always had every other category on lock and now you've got multis too. Watch the fuck out everyone!
OVERALL RATING: 4.3/5
LOGIC REVIEW
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You came with nice (if sometimes "played out"/cliche) multis and had some nice punches. The biggest thing that always hurts your rhymes is your inconsistency. You have a few lines that make me go "WTF?" (in the good sense... LOL) and some other real turkeys.
OVERALL RATING: 3.7
VOTE = DeaDSouLjaH
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thanx for votin NOT...
more votes pls ..
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"and some other real turkeys."
LMAO.....This Was A Rushed Verse.... :P Can't Take That Away From DeadSouljah Though, He Was On Point.
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ima make this one short and say that i vote for deadsouljah becuz of his better punches and multis
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Can We Have A Few More Votes For Me Please..... :-* ;D ;)
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Well I think even though Logic said "I am not in a good rhyming mood" ( which wasn't very smart lol) I think you came pretty hard, you came a bit simplistic though, and the multis were not too "complex" either. But overall, nice flow, nice verse. Deadsouljah also nice verse, multis were beter but incomplete a bit, nice wordlay, an alright flow, and you came ill too. In the end I have to go for Deadsouljah.
Peace
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alrite ... 3-0 K.O
nice battlin u Logic... gr8 opponent and friend too .. !!
pz
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ima make this one short and say that i vote for deadsouljah becuz of his better punches and multis
yeah basically what i-bo said logic i know u can do way better like that spawn battle spit u did a while ago..anyway
my vote =DS
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alrite ... 3-0 K.O
nice battlin u Logic... gr8 opponent and friend too .. !!
pz
I Repeat:
"DeadSouljah - Never My Homie, Tends To Fake A Friend"
;D Nah, I'm Joking. It Was A Dope Battle Even If The Wrong Person Won.