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Lifestyle => Tha G-Spot => Topic started by: Nelson Muntz on November 30, 2008, 06:15:46 PM

Title: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Nelson Muntz on November 30, 2008, 06:15:46 PM
well this is a song me and my group made, the beats made by me and i'm the 3rd one to rap tell me what u think


http://www.zshare.net/audio/5208512980186073
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Nelson Muntz on December 01, 2008, 05:53:04 PM
nothin?
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on December 08, 2008, 01:46:08 AM
cant turn on my speakers right now...ill drop some feedback when i can check it (probably 2morrow). 8)



this goes in the "Elements" section, though.
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Nelson Muntz on December 08, 2008, 05:33:44 PM
shit ma bad
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Þŕiņçë on December 08, 2008, 05:50:54 PM
dont like the beat or the hook.... and peppers on the track? u tryin to do smoov-e hot jalipinos?
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Now_Im_Not_Banned on December 08, 2008, 06:00:34 PM
Overall, it's not bad...was this done in a studio? it's definitely better than a lotta shit comin out nowadays, has a real raw sound, but still a little amatuerish. The hook reminds me of some ICP/Twizted shit, which is not my style, but I can picture "juggalos" liking this typa shit. Keep workin on it, you're probably the best rapper on the track and your production has a unique sound... you should maybe try fuckin with some solo shit.
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Nelson Muntz on December 09, 2008, 02:41:25 PM
dont like the beat or the hook.... and peppers on the track? u tryin to do smoov-e hot jalipinos?

why dont you like the beat no synths?
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Fly on December 09, 2008, 02:43:57 PM
yeah this was done in an apartment while blazing...the track we did with big left of la coka nostra is definatly better...this is 808 fav track of ours...not mine...btw...im second
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Nelson Muntz on December 09, 2008, 05:42:46 PM
haha word
Title: Re: pure white - peppers on the track
Post by: Nelson Muntz on December 10, 2008, 04:23:37 PM
Overall, it's not bad...was this done in a studio? it's definitely better than a lotta shit comin out nowadays, has a real raw sound, but still a little amatuerish. The hook reminds me of some ICP/Twizted shit, which is not my style, but I can picture "juggalos" liking this typa shit. Keep workin on it, you're probably the best rapper on the track and your production has a unique sound... you should maybe try fuckin with some solo shit.



thanks for the feedback Now_I_Know +1