West Coast Connection Forum
Elements => Tha Studio => Topic started by: MaD_DoGG on February 19, 2002, 04:56:28 PM
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hey yo i spit this simplistic bull shit/
yall keep fucking with me you will feel the full impact of this full clip/
you all seem to trip when i say im a white boy whos a crip/ just to start shit like a little bitch snitch/
be a real G like me and get rich/
i come one here just to spit a little game but it seems to me like yall bitches lame/
when i spit this shit yall bitches get slain/
blood sqirts every were like rain i love to see your life drain/
just to see your bitch ass feel the pain/
now what do yall bitches think of this white boy taking over the game/
yeah yeah fuck all you haters who talked shit about my last posted ryme! Die slow fucks!
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Well that's an improvement, but anything is a improvement from that shit you were spittin last time.
Just stick around and you'll improve.
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but anything is a improvement from that shit you were spittin last time.
LOL
but yeh, Sikotic was right, keep spittin homie.
peace, one love
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Yeah, this is a huge improvement over the previous ish you posted. Basically, your lyricism (multis, metas, etc.) could be improved but your main focus should be on expanding your horizons and your vocab. I mean, don't always rhyme about how you're a white guy who can rhyme.
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;D Pay attention and read all those comments of the emcees above me, they know what they're sayin'. I agree with them. I'm tryin' to improve myself, u should do the same... by battlin' as much as u can, defy them and battle them to learn some more skills! No beef dawg!
Peace!
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yo AMC u ignorant fool i asked u to battle me in a thread way back u aint replied whats up pussy? u wanna go down? or not?